by cha0stheory
Thank you for your first story. It was well written. You will have readers who will like it. Unfortunately, I think he's a grade A dick wad in both timing and technique. I couldn't kick such an ass to the curb fast enough.
I think he took her by surprise and was a total asshole. He could have got what he wanted without being so degrading and mean. If that is the way he is she should look for another Dom. When did she get unclothed so that he could deposit his cum on her breasts? I did not read that she got naked, but that he pulled up her skirt. I may be wrong and will give it another read, but he is still a bad Dom.