by demon160
I only know that my tears from reading your story told me how much the story meant to me. Beautifully written, I don't know whether it was true or not, but it really doesn't matter, because it felt completely real to me, and I hope it inspires others to share love and kindness with each other, and experience what sex is supposed to be about.
I might be mistaken, but this story seemed believable, as opposed to the majority of stories which are clearly fiction. It reminded me of the first time I was "seduced" by a woman who was significantly older than me. I'll say it again: Nicely written.
Best written story on this site. I am touched. I've never cried on literotica before this one. That shows how captivating this creation is. Keep up the good work.
Very poignant ...moving. loved the story..very believable
As time goes by, I find that some of the women I have loved and that were important in my life are gone. My life has never had a Linda, but it has had a Susan and a Bonnie and a Pam, and I thank you for bringing their memories back, even if just for a moment
I enjoyed this very much. As far as I am concerned this is a perfect story and told so well. Thank You George
I read this story shortly after its posting and was touched by its sensitivity. One comment describes the story as "sappy". Maybe I just like sappy stories. I wasn't sure what to say until others had made their comments.
Lue
Amazing story with heart and sensitivity. Extremely surprised to find something like this written here. Very happy to have read it. Beautiful job. Brought tears to my eyes. Thank you.
'Tis better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.
Many of us , I think, have had a great love which circumstances beyond our
control, sadly, prevented from being fulfilled. The joy somehow outlasts the sadness.
Few if any of us could pen our story so beautifully. You have told it for us.
Thanks
What a wonderfully moving story. A man of my age doesn't get that touched very often. This was just beautifully "sappy" and I loved it. Please write some more like this. Thank you for this one. I loved Linda and was almost heartbroken when she died at such a young age (remember 70 is the new 50).
Erotic and moving... you write extremely well and understand the dynamic of emotions and how they play well if used properly in writing erotica. Well done!
This is a standout piece. A truly stunning work. The author pulls the reader in by the heartstrings...
In my 24 years of being on the Internet I’ve never left a comment on erotica. Until now. This has me sitting on the bed bawling like a baby. So many of us have experienced forbidden loves that for whatever reason cannot be continued in normal society. But the tender memories and fondness always remain. Thank you for laying out so beautifully in words the human ability to love in such a deep, wide, lasting way
After my third read, this story still melts me.
Too believable.
This should be the model for ending my liaison.
I am constantly amazed at how you can put your words together and make us feel like we are right there. Fantastic story with so many feelings that go with it. Thank you again!
What a talented story teller. Every one I’ve read touches me in ways that make life seem deeper and brighter.
Lovely story a brief but life-changing mixed-age romance! With delicious male & female protagonists!
I thoroughly enjoyed your story--five stars worth. It's a touching, loving story.
nice romantic sexy story. very well written. 5 stars. even liked the "tear-jerker" ending!
I love this story, it was very heartwarming and emotional. The sex between LInda and Dan was great and got a lump in my pants as I read. The other lump was in my throat at the finish of the story when Dan found the note from Linda. Stories like this deserve more than five stars. Fantastic writing!
My Linda was in my life for 6 months over 40 years ago. Like Dan, she showed me what love is supposed to look and feel like, and profoundly effected my subsequent life. Mine is still with us, now in her 80s. This story has motivated me to get in touch with her and thank her for all that she did for me, while I still can.
Wow such a lovely and romantic story - congratulations well done and I shed some tears also.
Another great story! Definitely brought a few tears but what a happy and complete ending.