All Comments on 'Golden Lust Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hot!!!!

Very Good charpter, not so like the others.

Stay in watersports, pussy and ass eating.

I think change the farts session for a spit session.

Very nice.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Continues?

When the history continues?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Continues?

Continues?

HypnoticGoldHypnoticGoldover 7 years agoAuthor
Will Make Another Chapter.

Seeing as I keep getting messages, asking me to complete another chapter. I will start on chapter 9 very soon. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Continues?

?

HypnoticGoldHypnoticGoldabout 7 years agoAuthor
Will Continue...

My apologies to those, who've asked for the next chapter of the story.

I have started it, and will get on it daily again. I just got caught up in all the drama, that is modern day politics. But now, I really want to push out the next chapter, and get things going fluidly (no pun intended) again.

HypnoticGoldHypnoticGoldabout 7 years agoAuthor
A New Title.

I received another message in my email the other day, asking when the next chapter will be posted.

I have been working on it, but can't say how long it'll take to be finished. I have also been writing another story (One that's ACTUALLY going to be read over a huge radio station here in Houston), and it should be completed by tonight.

It may take a couple of days for Literotica to show it as available, but I hope everyone enjoys it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Continues?

The history will continues?

HypnoticGoldHypnoticGoldabout 7 years agoAuthor
Getting Back On The Story.

I just started my vacation.

I have been writing the next chapter on and off, but now have more time to dedicate to it fully. If everything goes according to plan, I should have the next chapter completed this week.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
?

Continues?

HypnoticGoldHypnoticGoldabout 7 years agoAuthor
Getting Close To Finishing.

@Anonymous.

Yes the next chapter is almost finished. It's currently at a little over 6,000 words, I'm trying to get it up to hopefully 8-9000.

As it have it about 4 pages long.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great !!!!

I can't wait for chapter 9, great history !!!!!

HypnoticGoldHypnoticGoldalmost 7 years agoAuthor
Almost Done.

Thank you for everyone's who checked. The latest chapter is nearly finished being written. Hopefully soon, it will be uploaded to the site.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Cool

Very great history, can wait for next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Chapter 9

The next chapter, will realese ?

HypnoticGoldHypnoticGoldalmost 7 years agoAuthor
Basically done.

@Anonymous.

I am typing out the last segment of Chapter 9 right now. It's currently over 13,000 words, I had planned on 9,000 or so, but it just kept getting better and better.

I think I should be able to finish it by tomorrow hopefully.

HypnoticGoldHypnoticGoldalmost 7 years agoAuthor
Chapter 9 Submitted.

Just finished writing Chapter 9, and it has been submitted, awaiting for approval.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Splendid, though it could use a good line edit.

I do feel compelled to point out one thing: rather than becoming deeper, the sound of a bottle filling with liquid rises in pitch. This is due to the resonating column of air growing shorter, causing the resonant frequencies to rise.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This series should have stopped with the first chapter...maybe the second. It has devolved into ridiculous drabble that is pretty much unreadable.

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