All Comments on 'Husband's Revenge Ch. 03'

It was great until then. When it fell off that cliff, I decided to save myself.

Sadly it all went to hell after that.

10 inch cock...like the other comment said, over you writers insisting on 10 inch cocks.

Well.....I started reading this part before I backtracked to read the whole three parts. Glad I waited. The writer lost me with Fred's 10" dick. 1*

Now we know...Like mother like daughter!! This part was more about incest than any other thing...And again a weak story...1*

How is this revenge again?

10 inch dick? Please get real.

that anyone can write but you and most others can't.

well looks like the tables are turning.

Your story premise has potential, but it's a tough read due to all the mistakes. Find someone to help you out and then improve.

You idiots that think you know so much and complain day after day about every story and yet come back for more need help.

ITS A FREE SEX SITE WITH JUST AMATEUR WRITERS.

GOD GET A LIFE.

I can't believe that you do. Otherwise, there wouldn't be non-sense sentences like these (cut and pasted here with no change):

"Jim tell me how bad you to fuck me."

"Why did you guys what to add this hung cock here."

I don't know anybody who would have this fantasy, a real turn off. Yuck.

Congratulations!!!

fag cuck shit.

To at least keep the tenses straight? First, it's "I did this", then it's "Jim did this". Doesn't matter, I guess, lousy story anyway.

No revenge yet. Must be in the next chapter

The story is good but all the spelling mistakes take the enjoyment out of reading the story.

How....WTF,,,,,,and an enforcer,,,TK U MLJ LV NV

Dumb de dumb dumb