All Comments on 'Rewarding Good Service'

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daylilygardenerdaylilygardenerover 7 years ago
Good Story

Strange cock for dessert...how nice.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hooray for curvy women

Thank you for this sexy story about the loviness of curvy women. Some grammatical things to work on, but overall a great read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
5th grade effort

Lack of erotic scene, basic language with out enticing setting and conversation.

Pretty dull, like a drunk 5th grader talking to a friend.

techreadertechreaderover 7 years ago
Good First Effort

Very nice first story. Keep going.

TMforfun2016TMforfun2016over 7 years ago
Great first story

Good flow, passion feels real.

Very good!

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