by das4200
Truthfully I really wanted to see him get with trixie but I'm really starting to like Chelsea and I understand why it wouldn't work with trixie. As always, I really look forward to the next chapter.
I wasn't sure how I felt, when the plot changed directions so drastically. However, now I'm looking forward to seeing what happens. Thanks, for continuing this story!
But he should not end up with Sam whatsoever. I can kinda see him letting her back into his life as friends because he is that type of person but should never become a sexual or romantic relationship again.
Amazing! A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! I asked you several months ago to not write about Alex and Sam, and whie mentioning her, you delivered! Oh, you delivered a great story! Dream sequence was A class! Sam and the future with her didn't depend on him, it depended on her and that future is gone, BEHIND him. Trixie was on one side, some random groupie doctor the other. But Chelsea was straight ahead. And he took it. Yes! And the description of Chelsea's cock was adorable.
This was well worth the wait. 5 stars.
I would love to see back Sam. She lied to him about cheating to help him get over her. Realy laing about such thing only for his good. And i loved that part of his dream with Sam
Leave Sam behind thats over and done with i love chelsea and love the stories hope we wont have to wait as long for the next one
Not happy with the turn of events. If it's true love as you started it out. Then you need to work on the reconciliation of Alex and Sam. Really left that blowing in the breeze.
I loved it even more then the first time. Still hoping to see a new chapter some time soon and...I have to admit...I kind of wanted to see Alex end up with Trixie.
are you going to continue this ? alex should have his first love back in his life
Hoping you find some motivation to finish this story. It's brilliant, and maybe finishing it will give you at least a little catharsis. Hope you're still getting notifications for these comments.
Really hoping you decide to finish this story it's pretty wonderful. Hopefully your hiatus comes to an end by the 2 year point cause that would be a pretty epic return. :P
All the best Das4200
You have got to finish the story, please! This has been one of the best reads I have encountered on Literotica and it cries out for at least a continuation and hopefully a conclusion. We all have our ultimate favorite girl and at this point in the story mine is Chelsea. However, based on Alex's dream there is yet a fourth candidate waiting in the wings and it sure would be nice to find out which girl he ends up with. I am a very senior citizen and for me time is rather critical so here's hoping you are soon to post the remaining chapters.
Seriously ?
11 chapters no w nothing for 6 years !
I really am fed up with all the unfinished stories on here.
I wish that as with the H markers for stories averaging 4.5 or higher there was a U for Unfinished on any story not continued with a 6 month gap since the previous chapter.
Please moderators, consider putting a U marker if we inform you of a story that hasn't been finished ? Thank you!