All Comments on 'Emma is Taken, Hard, in the Woods'

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BrendaNWBrendaNWover 7 years ago
hot story

I need to be taken just like Emma was... over and over again

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Not a bad sex scene, but lacking in story and there was no Halloween theme at all. This would have been better as a scene in a longer story where you told us a little about the characters first. You know, like foreplay.

nadaliwnadaliwover 7 years ago
Good start

I can't wait to read the next chaptets.

fuckmehotstufffuckmehotstuffover 7 years agoAuthor

Thanks guys! I definitely agree that some more backstory is a great thing, but you know - I was in the mood to get to the "point" the night I wrote this ;) I'll make sure to give some more context and depth next time <3

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