All Comments on 'Kevin and his Roommates'

I'm flattered that you took the time to write a companion piece to my story and pretty happy with how this turned out.

Good work!

Can't wait for the next chapter

I hope we get the "noncanonical" version where she fuckz all of them

The only thing I have to say is... Delete the pics... Grin... Yeah right...

Hope you enjoy writing the next one as much as we enjoyed reading this.

Thanks for writing this! I really liked the one from Kevin POV but I loved this one from Elise POV !! When can we expect part 2? Thanks gain

I enjoyed that one. A nice story that was light hearted and fun to read.

Can't wait for a rewrite of the next chapter. It was my favorite in every the series.

can you please do chapter two and three too pity please? this is really great! nice work!

Hey everyone!

Thanks for the great feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed this story. I am in the process of writing chapter two. I expect it to come out in the next week or two. In the meantime, please go check out Captain_Ron's original stories, and give him some feedback if you haven't already. If it wasn't for his stories, I wouldn't have written this alternate.

can't wait when you do elise point of view in chapter 3 if she actually did suck jeffs cock or actually did or pretended to have sex infront of sara and her boyfriend

Is the next chapter coming out already? :o This is greatttt

Update please. We're dying to read the next chapter!!

Fantastic story! 5*

I am fan of the originals and I LOVED this one too.