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A Real Surprise Party

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/15/04

IS IT THE WIMP IN YOU

WHY LET HER STAY,WHEN THE MOTHER ASK HER TOO LEAVE.KICK THE WHORE OUT,STOP THE TALKING NO RESPECT AND TRUST FOR THE HUBBY.

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by Anonymous06/15/04

Thanks

...for writing a story where the husband acts like a man and not a whimp that cums when his wife cheats. You could however put on some more efforts in explaining more details about him getting his wife in place and if she finally regretted the affair and wanted him back.

A well written story as allways Harddaysknight!

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by Anonymous06/15/04

Why let her stay

Of course he had to let her stay, how else could he have heard her wonderful excuses. Clearly he was no wimp, or he would have just left without the great revenge. Good story.

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The Best...

The only way to improve it would be to hear the rest of the conversation between husband and wife. That would be interesting. Another great job.

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by ryu7706/15/04

ROTFLMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hahahaha! Damn!! He was REALLY pissed off! Now this is NOT a wimp husband!!

Oh, and the wife shifting the blame to him, how convenient!

I agree with another poster, that there should have been more conversation between husband & wife at the end, but other than that, great job!!

Cheers!

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by Anonymous06/15/04

Did the 1st commenter read the last paragraphs?

As others pointed out, he let her stay because he was sure she was going to try and blame him, and, sure enough, she did. This absolved him of any part of this, and tomorrow she will be gone.

Wimp? Hardly.

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by Anonymous06/15/04

UNREEEALISTIC!

Give me a break! This is as realistic as Madonna having sex on Mars tomorrow night.

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by Anonymous06/15/04

far-fetched

The story is well written and entertaining even if it is unrealistic. The husband must be an orpanizational genius to get the party all set up in a day or two. The wife's reaction is the most unrealistic part of the story. To screw your boss in your home in front of your husbad and all of your family and not even feel guilty but try to blame the husband for the whole fiaso is pretty incredible. great fable 60 year old George

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by Hexxed06/15/04

pretty good

It was a bit far fetched but a good story of revenge and stupidity. As for those saying he was a wimp, read the damn story again people. Just because he doesn't toss her out right away doesn't mean he is a wimp. When she puts all the blame on him he realizes that there is no real hope of fixing things and his conscience is clear.

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by sherlock4006/15/04

Great story.

A good, strong husband figure who is not a wimp and is not stupid and clueless. Does what is necessary when the time is appropriate. It would be a once-in-a-lifetime coincidence for all those factors (relatives, the guys wife, etc.) to line up, but, hey, that's what fantasy is all about.

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by GoodWifey06/15/04

Great NON WIMP story

And to those two gutless anon posters saying this is far fetched or unrealistic, get real yourselves!
I suppose you think if he stood there and wanked while his wife and the other guy screwed, that would be real?
Poor clueless bastards.
Keep up the good work HDK.

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by Rob Conner06/16/04

Bravo!!

Good Story! My KInd of Guy!

She was totally mind fucked. What a bimbo! And now everyone knows it. Sweet Revenge!

Good Show!

Rob

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by Anonymous06/16/04

Story was OK

I sort of liked the story as he wasn't a wimp jerking off as his wife cheated on him. However, in this case I can sort of understand the wife cheating. His reaction to her cheating was anger and indifference. If my partner cheated on me I'd be angry but also hurt and I certainly wouldn't be able to eat. He did not love his wife and obviously, she did not love him. These things happen and it's best to get over the marriage, on with your life and try to forget the cheating. In his case the forgetting is a bit too easy. Thanks for not creating a wimp husband just a uncaring bastard who's married to total bitch.

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by Anonymous06/16/04

former Mrs. Ross

does he spend the night at her motel and become husband Mr. R was playing to be

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by Anonymous06/16/04

Way to go!!!

It's about time there was a really well written and well structured story about the guy getting revenge. None of this silly "I'ts okay honey...," then going out and getting with the other guys wife, draining the bank account, canceling the credit cards, blah, blah, blah... getting married to her and all the happily ever after crap.
This is something a really creative, smart guy would do; especially grabbing some wings and a beer, then sitting down to watch the show. Good one Harddaysknight!!!

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by Anonymous06/16/04

a nonny mouse

Bravo!!! A very good story made better by the fact that there wasn't a wimp in sight.

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by maclone06/16/04

Unpractable but definately probable

A wonderful story that was well written. some people think its unrealistic. You ever throw a party in college, make a few calls and if people aren't busy they'll show up, especially for a surprise party for a close family member. Some say it's not likely that a woman in that situation would turn the blame on her partner, that's the easiest way to win arguments, women do it all the time. I really liked the touch of making Mrs. Ross buy her own plane ticket. Definately a great read. Bravo

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by Anonymous06/16/04

Great Story

I only voted a 5 (or 100) is becuase the scale doesn't go higher.

Too Cool finish.

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Liked it, but

Hey Hard, i like the story man, but it did need some more elaboration at points. It was good, but not as good as some of your other works. Which BTW I like because your guys usually kick ass! Keep up the good work.

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by Anonymous06/16/04

Hahahahaha

I was laughing so hard at this, I'd agree that the only thing that would make it better would be more dialog between the husband and wife at the end. It was great though.

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by Anonymous06/16/04

Your best yet

When I finsihed your story I thought shame and guilt and how public judgement shapes our behaviour. On one hand I wish this story had been continued through to the divorce but on the other I envisioned Emily's life after this incident. There's so much to explore in the aftermath. I would just like to hear Emily express shame...that would be the ending for me.

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by HuwR06/16/04

Great Story

One of the best I have read in a long time. AS they say Women are from Venus and Men are from Mars, but it seems that some husdands, but not this one, are from Pluto (small and insignificant).
Keep up the good work.
HuwR

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by dside06/17/04

Excellent story

Great to see a real man story. Let the wimps write about wimps.

It was great the way he set everything up. Now to make the story perfect, write a sequel showing all the ramifications to their actions. Even though everyone now knows what she is, she still seemed to have no clue and blames everyone else.

BURY THEM!

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by Anonymous06/17/04

A man after my own heart!!!

BRAVO!!!! Now thats how a real man handles a cheating Slut. More Please.

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by Anonymous06/17/04

Finally A man with balls

This is great for all us Guys out there. this points out its not always the guy that cheats and Its great in these stories to see a guy who does not just act like a pussy and let his wife do this shit and go along with it.

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by Anonymous06/19/04

WOW

Totally cool! the 1st story i read in literotica that could actually happen real life!

maybe there's others.. i dunno

anywayz.. good ending to a good story..


PS. statitically, about women are more likely to cheat then their husbands by about 73% according to a report in the reader's digest. this could be a textbook version of wat to do then!

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by Anonymous06/24/04

THE BEST

LOVED IT BEST LAUGH FOR AGES ITS NOT WHAT I EXPECTED

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by doormouse06/24/04

I have to agree

This was well written, highly probable, and extremely entertaining.

Reality though, from a female perspective, she wouldn't have been there at the end of the night.

I can see where others said he shouldn't be eating, but he was taking back control, and more than likely still in shock or partial denial as his plan unwound.

I'd love to see a chapter two to this one. Where the reality began to sink in, the depression of a separation, the feeling of ultimate betrayal.

Great story, loved it ;-)

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by Salamis07/08/04

A Return to Shunning

The Amish have a custom of "shunning" members of their tribe who've violated their customs or their moral code. The practice is extreme and rarely used, but oftentimes appropriate.
Your story made me recall that practice and how we might apply it in the overall society. Probably the closest we would ever get would be to let someone expose their own deceitful behaviour just as the husband did in this story. His actions showed a response more painful than violence and yet more acceptable. Thank you for a good read.

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by Nightowl2107/27/04

Adultery

We could return to the practice of branding their foehead with an "A" as it was done before.

That stigma would give them second thoughts before they began fucking around, I bane betcha!!

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by Anonymous09/14/04

THERE ARE A LOT WAYS OF BEING A WIMP

GETTING OFF WATCHING MEN FUCK YOUR WIFE IS A TYPE OF BEING A WIMP.PLAYING MIND GAME IS A TYPE OF BEING A WIMP.PSCY. 101 DON'T MAKE YOU A MAN.ITS OK TO GET MAD AND RELEASE RAGE.

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by Anonymous01/27/05

perfect

something i will have to keep in the back of my mind if i ever need it.... loved his revenge method

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by sexmate01/27/05

SWEET REVENGE

I would have liked more conversation at the end between the two.

All married guys have been thru the twisting game of turning the tables with the blame. It must be in their genes. But luckily I haven't heard it was your fault I fucked him!
Thanks for writing!
Sexmate

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by Anonymous04/15/05

Best Cheating Wife Story

She deserved it. The cheating might be forgivable. However, it was far more than that. Her disrespectful comments about her husband were unforgivable.

This site needs more authors like this. How wonderful not to have some whimp cumming in his pants.

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by Anonymous06/07/05

playing mind game isnt nessesary wimpy

Releasing your rage are for 15 years old, i'm sure the one who posted this are at that age. Real men have deep seathed anger. Punching the guy who fuck your wife or your wife isnt going to get that seathed anger go away. The best way to give yourself peace is psychological revenge..which is what the guy did. He makes her looks like a peace of shit in front of her family.

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by LeBroz07/14/05

Great Tale

Even in a story as good as this, these eunuch trolls come crawling out from under their rocks to bitch & whine that he's a wimp.

I think the only way they'd be satisfied is if he kills his wife & her lover - and then spends the rest of his life in jail.

Great little tale - since she holds him in such contempt there's nothing left for him. Now she's exposed to everyone for being a cheap whore. So now he's got loads of witnesses to her infidelity; bet she has no job security - best get busy on that resume girl; and then she's trying to blame HIM for the mess she's in.

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by gatorhermit08/06/05

Realistic Reaction...

I really appreciate your description of her reaction upon being caught - blame it all on her husband. In my experience, the loving "I'll do anything to restore the marriage" wife just doesn't happen - the more wrong they are, the more fury that is contained within the attack.

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by Anonymous09/15/05

the story was cool

look smartass for a woman to cheat on husband most times they lose respect for him,think of him as a wimp or less of a man.the remark about have a beer and wimp out to her about his fault not hers.that shows she had know respect and lok at hubby as a wimp.the hubby act os cool he look like a fool,eating chicken while wife fucking someone else.hubbv act weak, wife treat him as he act.the hubby action in this story to me he will take her back.

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by Anonymous09/21/05

nice little story

One final touch.....

He should have spat in her face..... I would have.....

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by 10/05/05

Timing is everything!

Impeccable orchestration!

By the way, did you see in the paper that Madonna has sex on Mars last night!

Who woulda thunk it!

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by Anonymous10/09/05

Thanks for the fun

really enjoyed reading.............

nice to see a man win in a story without using violence

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by Risq_00110/13/05

Very Good story

I loved it. I kept laughing so much it took a while to finish it all.


Very, very well done.

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by 10/13/05

When I decide to let

my husband know that I know about his girlfriend, will you plan the party. That was funny, well written, articulate and exactly how I would want to do it. You deserve more stars than I can give on here. Just know you are now my true hero...Take care and hey, look me up sometime...lol.

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by Anonymous11/06/05

Hilarious

Hilarious. Nice dialogue. That was fun.

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by Mr Eames12/26/05

just amazing

that was a great read. i think someone else said it before, i am so glad to see the husband/male step away the "victor" for once. thanks, you have me hooked. (if my wife ever does something to that nature beware, i have ammo!)

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by Anonymous02/15/06

Love the Husband's Character and Wit

I enjoy all your submissions, because the husbands' characters are strong, plausible, and sensible. Your humor & wit is very very good. Please keep writing!

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by fregen02/27/06

I think...

this has to be one of my most favorite stories In Literotica. I come back and read it again and again. Just superb.

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by Anonymous02/27/06

i think somebody has lost there mind

what husband is going to sit and watch a man fuck his wife and eat wings and drink beer.sometimes we out smart ourselves by been to clever.hubby look like a clown.she had no respect for him the start,because she ask the boss come to my and hubby bed.there was two peas in a pot dumber and dumby.no emotions and fire in the hubby for finding out about wife affair.

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by thewordsmith259004/30/06

A Tasty Read!

I do love a good satire! In fact, I had to read most of this story to my husband to explain why I was laughing so hard that I had to spit my mouthful of coffee back into the mug.

To those who cannot fathom a husband watching his wife fuck another man without picking up a gun and blasting holes through the both of them, I have three words: no-strings revenge. Her life is completely ruined, while hubby is free to move on with his life.

Besides, how many times in his life can a man say that he combined a deck party with wings and potato salad, a porn show, and revenge?

A truly tasty read.

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by Wordcutter06/25/06

Bloody BRILLIANT!

...and as to 'Anonymous' comment that they '...think somebody has lost there mind' [it's 'their', BTW], well....

1) Love those folks that put it all on the line to blast out their negative comments while hiding behind an 'Anonymous' account

2) The story was clever, the cuckolded hubby's solution/revenge brilliant and OH-FUCKING-RIGINAL!!!!!!

Great story, you Beatles fanatic you...

"Go to the window. Go to the window."

B

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