All Comments on 'My Best Friend Stacie'

Pls keep going you have a great story started now let's see what else they are wanting from each other...

Nice foreplay. Next, make love with her!

Great story please write more

And we do! Now go and write more!

Excellent first story, loved it!

Often best friends develop feelings for each other but neither wants to make the first move. It is wonderful when the barrier breaks down and two friends become lovers.

This was both incredibly sexy and sweet, so much so that it literally screams SEQUEL!!!

You Need to finish the story

More please!

Basically what i said in the title

There needs to be a sequel. Especially since she said she was going to suck him off. She sounds like a fun first. Perhaps there could be a threesome with Karen or save that for a third installment!

Dude this was so much fun to read and it was hot asf. A sequel would be nice. Keep up the good work!!!!!!

Ha! See what I did there? I amuse myself. You need to pay attention to which verb tenses you're using. You switch from past to present in the same sentence frequently. It's distracting which is a shame because I love the concept, and the scenario is really hot. Looking forward to their other adventures.

Like everyone has asked... you need to write part 3,4 6 as well

Also, you should’ve Forever thankful to Stacie

Seems like todd got more than a first kiss behind the bleachers in 10th grade from Stacie or she has been have "full experiences" with lots of guys.

But you really need an editor/proofreader. Errors are distracting.

I'm a sucker for stories with wordy and elaborate chapters, so I'm quite surprised that I enjoyed this a little too much. Anyone could read this with ease, which is nice. The pacing is a tad fast, but generally, it's fine. The main characters were instantly likable, and I felt their genuine relationship withing just this one chapter. Also because I'm a sucker, again, for 'best friends to lovers' stories; Kyle's realization of his feelings toward Karen and Stacie, won me over (not that professional of a sentence, but I just wanted to point that out; you can pretend this sentence doesn't exist if you desire a not so biased 'review').

As for the structure, grammar errors, and all things technical... I did not notice much of them. Some that I did, were a bit distracting, but nothing common sense could not fix.

Overall a great story! A sweet, carnal read (nigh) any busy person could read AND FINISH for fun.

Can’t wait for the next episode.

What a lovely way to learn.

Good premise.

But much too rushed.

Needs to slow doown with MANY more details.

Needs some involvement of/with her breasts.

Three stars.

I liked the story idea but there was little to no character development and so the relationship between the characters seems false and constructed. It doesn't feel romantic or fun, but just like meaningless sex.

Good premise.

Sadly all sexual contact is rushed.

What was her rush to make him cum in seven minutes?

Should have been some slow, gentle, exploration of his cock and his balls. Should have been extended dialog about what she was doing, how it felt to him, how it felt to her, and what might be happening next.

What was the rush for him to eat her out before ANY preliinaries? He'd never seen a live pussy before, exploration would have been logical.

Three stars.