All Comments on 'Ms. Adler: Leadworth Ch. 01'

More chapters are expected sooner than later or your potential readers will go on to other stories.

the email says 'promptly at 11pm' and yet it is a morning appointment.

'Natalie had only seen witnessed' is a redundant use of words. An editor would be good. Not a bad start. Interested to see where it does.

Thanks for sharing this story ....

One of my favorite literary characters, always so much fun.