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of stories but there's too much unresolved. Did Nathalie ever have more children. How did the Family deal with her attitude. Did Elise have More then the first.

I found chapter two now we need chapter three to tie up the loose ends.

Well as Chief3Blanket said so far so good, just a note that the stories should be linked together. The story needs to continue with Élise returning to the US to marry him and form a polygamy and continue having kids. 5 stars