All Comments on 'Castle Slave Ep. 05: Scarlet Woman'

Will she rule ? How ?

Will she organize elections ? Name somebody ?

What about the lost knowledge ?

You have a very interesting universe. I hope to read more about it soon ! I really enjoyed this story.

I think necessarily she has to become a creature of the night, a roving devil and instigator of revolution, aided by her ragtag army of Scarlet Women. Meanwhile, the Servants of the Court would be building a secret community dedicated to a new vision of humankind.

Not sure how I would create an erotic tale within this universe, but I think about it often.

Thanks for reading & commenting!

Oh, I've thoroughly enjoyed this story, your universe is quite intruiging and your pen is sharp! The open end is cruel but understandable, and while I'd love to hear more about what happens next, I know that the new Scarlet Queen will prevail. Thank you for sharing, and I'm looking forwards to checking out the rest of your gallery!

Many thanks for reading & commenting...

I really enjoyed writing this tale. It may be one of the best things I've ever written.

What the hell did this story turn into?

A dystopian revolution.

I am hoping another iteration or some form of this story continues. Not my normal reading but as soon as I start to get really into it....it ends. Great writing you are very talented. The only critique I have is that it's over. Signs of a great story.

I don't think there's a good way to continue this - it got very dark towards the end - but thank you for reading.

'...into the minds of others,' On that note I conclude my book report with "The Queen is dead," "Judgement Day is here."

AlinaX Five Big Wet Ones!

Thank you for reading all the way through, and for all the comments too. :-)