by Ringabel
Well written story, well thought out and edited as well. Can't wait to see what shenanigans our protagonist gets up to next as well as a POV with Erika and Zoe.
An interesting setting, worth the wait for the next chapter, looking forward to where it goes
Well done, but can definitely get bolder and riskier.
Really great story! I love the way you have handled things so far! Keep it up!
Rigabel,
I almost stopped reading Chapter 1 since most of the stories I find I like most here have EROTICISM as it's primary focus. In yours, the eroticism is secondary to the main storyline and while very well done, that aspect of your story/adventure never captured my attention. The "magical powers" and the learning exploration you have your Sculptor experience is what captured and retained my attention.
Great job. I look forward to reading the next, and the next, and then next....
X-Man
A.K.A. xavierw
What a fresh story. It doesn't resemble anything else.
The power is great and the way he uses it is also great.
Maybe you could expand a little on the sex if you want to improve your story which is amazing already.
The only default I can find is it takes too much time for you to write a new chapter so please give us a summary of the first two chapters in your next installment. I don't want to read the previous chapters every time a new one comes out. I'll definitely read this whole story again but only when it is finished. Or you could write faster if you want ;) either way is fine with me.
An interesting and enjoyable read. Interesting concept for MC.
Looking forward to more.
Have to say this story is something I come back to quite often just because of how thought provoking it is, still looking forward to the next chapter just hoping it comes soon
I still come back to this story even now to reread, Even though it's been a year I'm hoping for the next chapter to be released or your writers block to no longer be blocked.
Wondering if you have any new updates on this story, I know it's been close to a year since the last one which was on your profile, just wondering because I can't help but keep coming back to this hoping for a new chapter, had so much potential
Just found this, love it. Don't want to pressure you, but I'd love more of it
This story is hands down one of my favorites and even after several years and multiple read throughs. It’s just as good as the first time!
I agree with the other comments, I would love to see a few more chapters, even if it’s more of the same, some sculpting, and lots of kinky sex. The revelations at the end of the chapter leave the options endless!