by Bluepen451
I absolutely loved it! Well written and very erotic. I gave it 5 stars because I couldn't give it more! And I was so delighted when you correctly called it a "chaise longue" rather that the usual and incorrect "chaise lounge". The device is a long chair, and the correct French for that is "chaise" the French word for chair and "longue" the French feminine form of the word (to agree with chaise, which is a feminine noun in French) that means long! "Chaise lounge" means nothing in reference to the device in French. It's just wrong. Kudos on the correct name and spelling!
Fab absolutely fucking fab, would love to lick up her squirt, then tounge fuck her to heaven. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc's UK322
Absolutely loved it. Can completely see her in her trainers after a run, naked otherwise. I can’t wait to see where you take her, or where she takes you.
Sorry for your loss you Naughty girl, your way beyond IHOP now ! You should look up and see who heard you, and watched. Should you need a handyman I offer my services
glad there's 3 more chapters, and really going to enjoy checking out your other stories!
5 + fave story, author
I love the concept of a woman awakening to her sexuality through masturbation and fantasy. The way you have presented Alice is very arousing. I have to admit I was touching myself the whole way through. Well the rest of the series is waiting for me. The next time she orgasms I will too.
A lovely opening chapter.
I'm looking forward to the following installments