All Comments on 'Loving Yvonne'

Loved it! Very engaging and great writing. Pls write more. Would have loved it if this was developed more into a Series.

I definitely enjoyed it. Thanks for writing it.

WOW, excellent..very well done. Will read more if like this

What a way to lose your virginity. Somehow managed to read all through while slowly stroking my cock through my satin panties (I love them) before I just had to release all the built up cum. More stories like this please.

Glad to have your stories here. I hope you will continue to give us some more.

Thanks for sharing,

Santacruzman

This was a fantastic read , I was sorry it ended and look forward to your next story ;

Chrissycd2000

Thanks for sharing your story. Really, really enjoyed it.

I'm a big fan of yours ! Thanks for posting your stories here!

I wish I could express my feelings for another person like you do. I hope you continue to write about transsexual people or even better continue this story line.

This is the first time I have read a story of this type and applaude you!

Hi great story I really liked reading it

Great story, thank you:)

Great sex but even greater story of young love ,respect and mutual growth. That was really the best part. Thanks again.

nicely written good story and erotic too ....simply great ! good job .

SJH

Nice young love story too.

I usually don't like story's this long but could not stop reading it! Awesome job, well written!

It was just...just amazing, i loved it, you have a gift my friend, use it well.

Awesome job!

I like the way the story was put together

Nicely written and good at detail

Great story! I wish I knew a Yvonne myself...

Finally a futa story where said futanari isn't just some sex-starved top. I'd love to hear more about these two, or another hermaphrodite who loves to give AND receive!

I'll preface this by saying that I'm not as fond of futa/hermaphrodite stories as I am of stories about trans girls/crossdressers/femboys or even 'garden variety' females, mainly for realism-related reasons.

This was solid enough that it didn't bother me on more than a cursory background note. I think the almost parodical hyper-prudism of the guy's family background was an excellent choice, and it had the added benefit of dodging the usual 'gender confusion' that pretty much all stories like this have, but in a believable way that doesn't make the main character unrealistically progressive about it. Yvonne's family sound like some odd ducks, but not in a bad way.

Anyway, I enjoyed this story (in both senses >> ) and I hope to see more of your writing on here.

What a lovely story! Keep up the great work.

Loved everything about this story I would love to have a hot girl with a huge cock and sweet tasting balls and cum. Please write some more stories like this one my dick gets so hard reading them.

Extremely lovely story. Sizzling hot sex, but with an openness and, dare I say, mindfulness to the new and delicious experiences.

Thank you so verrrry much.

Absolutely brilliant. This was so tender & funny, romantic & sweet. I wholeheartedly give it the "Randy Lesbian Seal of Approval”. 5 well deserved stars. Please, please, keep on writing, even if not erotica. You have a rare talent for beautiful storytelling. Keep polishing your craft (& your knob if you have one). Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.

I agree with CliterateDyke's assessment and bestow upon this fine work of erotica the 'Randy Bisexual Male Seal of Approval'. If you continue to write, my brain and my dick will be very thankful.

What an amazing story. Had to pull on off on this one.

I have always fantasized about a bi experience like this.

I so enjoy sucking a big hard cock and having my ass fucked too.

Thank you. Well written.

I echo the other comments made about your skills as a writer and sincerely hope you continue with other stories.

I can say I truly enjoyed the story more than any other I have read. Wish I could have the same creativity in writing.

I loved how smoothly and yet methodically they moved from one position to the next. Yvonne's level or communication was A+ and part of what made this so enjoyable for me.

Thank you a very sexy well told right of passage love story . Well told and it just flowed .

I won’t take much time to rehash other users feedback, but I must say that this was an awesome story from beginning to end. Obviously being in this section of the site the reader knows Yvonne’s big reveal, but you did an amazing job of investing them in it, the action feels believable and genuine, and resolves itself well. Kudos to you jokermon797, and I hope you continue to write more in the future

A very enjoyable piece; you captured both characters very well.

I have to say that in years reading erotica and in particular TS stories, this is the best I’ve read.

The descriptions are great, the pace, perfect, the fact that both were virgins discovering new things, made it special.

Very well written, please do write again and again...

If this is your first story and you intend to write more, we, your readers, are in for a real treat.

Deliciously hot and delightfully over-the-top, this is how stories should read. Exceptionally stimulating and exciting, encouraging our juices to flow with same carefree abandonment that your story's two lovers enjoy.

(The occasional spelling error is easily overlooked and forgotten - but do check before posting...)

5 stars is a minimum - I'd happily give you more!

Well done!

The BEST story I have EVER read, Thank You

I like the others hope you continue this story if possible, or other stories you have a good flow and keep our attention. The only thing is now I have very wet panties. da.cd@frontier.com

I don't want it to end

Great read, exceptionally well written. Kept my attention and slowly stroking during the entire saga. Both characters were ideal for each other and without judgements. Look forward to more great reads, hopefully soon! Thx

What a wonderfully erotic story. I look forward to reading more adventures of Yvonne and Marty.

One of the rare stories that I did not want to end.

That was the hottest, most erotic story that I have ever read.

Wow! That is surely one of the very best erotic stories that I have ever read! It is so imaginative and well written! I did not want it to end! I hope there will be more!

your story is the first time I have ever read a story with a hemorphidite in it.... it was wonderful keep up the good work... I would have given you 10 stars if they were an option...

Was for sure the hottest story I have read on here. Great job and keep up the good work.

Wow this is definitely my most favorite story on Literotica. I haven't been this turned on and excited to see what happens in a long time. The writing flowed nicely, great story line and every act flowed seamlessly into the next. I look forward to your next work of art.

Thank you for this, and good luck with your next piece because this is going to be hard to beat.

That was a wonderful read. The characters came alive and it had great flow! I would love to read more of yours!

What a story I’m not much of a reader but I couldn’t stop !!!!

I could not stop reading until I got to the end ! Now I want more !

Wow, really had my interest the entire way through. Made me wish I was you.

Easily one of the best written stories on literotica! I would love to read more on this story line . Awesome job ! Keep writing!

This is without a doubt, the best story I have ever read. The characters were real and the sex wasn't just tossed in like it is in many other stories.

I very much look forward to reading more of your creations.

What a great story. Write more PLEASE!!!

Wow. Really funny and touching love story, w/great descriptions and writing that really 'takes you there'. And smokin' hot to boot! Its a special day when you find something this good out of the blue. More, please!

I read this several months ago and keep coming back to it. Hasn't gotten old yet. This is one of those stories that's so good it transcends genre.

The single best Futa X Male one-shit on this entire site. I'd give almost anything to see more by this author. This is the best and only work on this site by Jokermon and that fact pains me to no end.

I agree with most of the other comments here. I thought I would read a random story in this section....it appears I chose one of the best. Not sure if Yvonne's situation is feasible but an excellent read nonetheless.

A.F.C. Somerset.

Wow, second time reading this story and I still wish it was longer. Thanks for the Great story.

It's possible (sort of), just very, very, very, very unlikely. First off, let's address what the term intersex means. Intersex people used to be called hermaphrodites, but that term is now outdated (futa is also very much a no-no). The medical community is now calling this condition 'disorders of sex development (DSD)'. According to the UN Office of the High Commissioner for Human Rights, "Intersex people are born with sex characteristics (including genitals, gonads and chromosome patterns) that do not fit typical binary notions of male or female bodies. Intersex is an umbrella term used to describe a wide range of natural bodily variations. In some cases, intersex traits are visible at birth while in others, they are not apparent until puberty. Some chromosomal intersex variations may not be physically apparent at all."

How likely is it that a person is born intersex? There are few firm estimates of the number of intersex people. The now-defunct Intersex Society of North America stated, "If you ask experts at medical centers how often a child is born so noticeably atypical in terms of genitalia that a specialist in sex differentiation is called in, the number comes out to about 1 in 1500 to 1 in 2000 births [0.07–0.05%]. But a lot more people than that are born with subtler forms of sex anatomy variations, some of which won't show up until later in life." Blackless, Fausto-Sterling et al., said in two articles in 2000 that 1.7 percent of human births (1 in 60) might be intersex, including variations that may not become apparent until, for example, puberty, or until attempting to conceive.

How likely is Yvonne's situation? Insanely unlikely. The number we start with is 0.07–0.05% just for people with significantly atypical genitalia. Then she would need both a fully formed penis and vagina, which is either next to impossible or impossible. This is because genital development is a bit of a sliding scale: a fully-formed penis is on one side and a fully formed vagina is on the other, with ambiguous genitals in the middle (see the Quigley scale). She almost certainly wouldn't have both a penis and a clit, because that would also require her to have diphallia (which results in two penises or pens-like structures), the occurrence of which is 1 in 5.5 million boys in the United States. She likely wouldn't need morning-after pills, because intersex conditions often result in infertility, especially conditions that result in a fully-formed penis. She also likely wouldn't have significant breast tissue since intersex hormonal levels are usually way out of wack.

Unfortunately for futa porn-lovers, the reality of and life for intersex people is very different from porn. In real life, intersex people face stigmatization and discrimination from birth, or from discovery of an intersex trait, such as from puberty. This may include infanticide, abandonment and the stigmatization of families. Globally, some intersex infants and children, such as those with ambiguous outer genitalia, are surgically or hormonally altered to create more socially acceptable sex characteristics. However, this is considered controversial, with no firm evidence of favorable outcomes. Intersex people are sadly unheard-of, even though the 1/60 number above puts the likelihood of any sort of intersex condition at about the same rate as people having red hair.

Nevertheless, "Loving Yvonne" is very well-written and very hot. Please continue to write.

Good story, well written. While jokermon does 'magical realism' as well as anyone in the biz, I think it's important to point out this author has always stressed their stories are fantasy. They are not intended to represent actual people or real-life medical conditions. The term 'futanari' should automatically tell you that you're dealing with fantasy characters, basically elves and dragons type stuff. And none of this should detract from the fact that this is a lovely tale of blossoming erotic romance. I liked it.

You must be the absolute life of the fuckin' party... your comment is like a cold damp towel thrown on a raging hard-on and/or steamy wet cunt. Who cares if the statistical likelihood of Yvonne existing in the real is 0.06 or 0.006?

I mean really... MOST of the stories on Lit, are unrealistic, and not likely to occur in the wild. I inow this on good authority, 'cause I have read a fuck ton of them in the years since it launched, (I found Lit about 6 months post launch, and have consumed voraciously, since, through surgeries, injuries, and other typical issues related to having a beat and broken body, and thank the wonderfully sick and beautifully twisted minds who dream up this shit. it takes my mind off the pain.)

So fuck you with your stats of un-likelihood, and the horse you rode in on. If I, anybody else, want to think their might be a real Yvonne out there, it's our own damn dream, don't fuck with it, ya putz.

A Yvonne Seeker...

You know, I. Just. Realized. I had an older, big boobed, step-sister Yvonne... damn, I might have missed a Lit Triple Crown, right under my nose: a magical step-sister with dual plumbing & big boobs!

Oh, well, I did NOT miss out on my OTHER older, big boobed, anal loving, Bi step-sis, Delaine, from the other side of my family. (Now that I think about it, she was a Lit Five Tool Hall of Famer!) She would come visit me in college and pick up coeds to share. As they say, caring is sharing... or is it sharing is caring? LOL

(I was a spoiled 'baby brother'.) Sure too bad they never met! (Make that

a spoiled, gluttonous, 'baby brother'.)

By far, one of the best stories I've read in a long time!

Best story I have ever read. Kept me hard the whole time. Ready for more

This story goes to show how far off the mark everyone else is with this genre. Every other attempt simply makes the guy a frightened caricature of a girl and the futa a violent and sadistic caricature of a man. I nevertheless kept looking and am heartened to have found someone who actually understands what it's like to be with a strap on girl. Congratulations on your achievement ad I look forward to more from you , perhaps on other topics as well.

I really loved this story, perhaps one day you'll post some more?

This author has written dozens more stories (some of them full-length novels) and they can all be found in the Stories section at futanaripalace (dot) com. Including the original, unexpurgated version of Loving Yvonne. You have to join, but it's free..

Wish i had an Yvonne in my life. :)

Nice warm vibe throughout and lovely innocence of exploration

A quarter million views and 485 favorites (at this counting). How is this story not number one in the HOF?

Oh this was simply the very best! Just the very best.

There are so many spot on comments here that i won't get carried away, but wow!

very nice loving, caring and romantic stories I have read.

its going on favorite lists. sexy, passionate and hot

very good... Thank you

Far and away the best futa story on here, 5 stars.

Outfucking standing ! Orgasmic ! The world needs more Yvonne's...seriously.

Very well written. Good solid story. Built up was great, action even better. One of the best here. Thank you, tanya

this was a good surprise had to de-lurk and say so great story

This ode to jerking your dick that starts this story off is weird.

I loved it, but where is my Yvonne ! I understand it's fiction................. but I want one !

WOW! Great story, I grew up in a rural setting And could have used an Yvonne to break me in. Very well written

Thank You!

Great story of young unexpected love.& lust..with a big slice of fictional 'understanding' shoe-horned in there...Plus a happy ending..Many thanks.

I loved the girlfriend aspect. I liked it

Excellent - just Excellent !

Rapier

This is the best story on literotuca. It has good sex, plot, characters and for once the futa didn't "dominate him" or "ruin his life". Love Yvonne's character and sex appeal. And I relate to Mike alot in some ways five stars 10/10. 🌟 🤗🤗

That was a awesome story

Guess a little late to game but still great story

Think Yvonne could help mike find his female self

Boy friend girl friend interchangeable

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Very Kawaii und Romantique!

Nicely balanced couple.

11/10!!!!!

Thank you Soo much for writing a story that had a hermaphrodite who was just a normal everyday girl, and not an Amazon hentai Futa (even though we're technically, for both true and psuedo- hermaphrodites, 'Futanari'). It was wonderful to get to read a well written, hot story that was romantic and realistic about people like myself: I'm XXY psuedohermaphroditic (mostly realistic excepting that 1)You gave her 2 urethras, which in true hermaphrodites is in the penis... even if surgically corrected to only there [2 openings to your bladder causes problems with hella leaking] so as to allow Cowper's, prostatic, and possibly seminal fluids to emit from the 'normal' location. And 2)For both true and pseudohermaphrodites, we're usually infertile so cumming inside is not a problem. Just thought someone might wanna know these things... but every intersex person's body and corrections are different so never think 100% sure of anything for individual intersex people, of which True hermaphrodites are RARE.) It was also wonderful that, especially in this age where insane and hateful bigotry is on the rise involving anyone who doesn't fit the prescribed roles of hetero and cis... even more if that means that your sex organs or birth certificate don't match the person you really are, that EVERYONE that mattered in this story, including Yvonne herself were totally ok with her differences. A++ -Tysvm😘💋

Loved it what can I say that others haven't all ready said thank you mistress love 💖 Tom/Tammy

Freaking awesome. Loved it.

They live in one of those batshit insane puritanical towns.

My condolences.

The absolute best hermaphrodite story I've read yet. And I've read a lot of them

So well written with fantastic descriptions!! Instant favorite!

Excellent story. The maturing of Marty is very cool.

Would love another chapter of this Loving story!!! Well done!

hottest story on the whole site! Loved it. tender and gentle as well as keeping me breathless. Well written!

We seriously get this amazing story from this writer and it’s the only story they posted. We are getting robbed! This is such a good story, well written, sexy and erotic and just a genuine good feeling story to read. A must read!

Jokermon797…if your still active on this website, please start writing and posting again.