All Comments on 'Halloween Sexy Nurse Oblivious'

Love the pictures of Chrissy - she is hot!

The story is ok, not really my thing and the drug use is a bit too close to date rape for me.

The biggest issue though is the complete lack of proof reading or editing, some apalling spelling mistakes and autocorrected words that make no sense at all. If you could get an editor, or spend some time yourself to double check it, the reader experience would improve a lot!

Now that's what I call illustrated........much more of Chrissy please.

Insert_ name you are right on the money with the auto correct and proofreafing. The storyline is more non consensual and will lead toward that. I feel the drug was fitting because chrissy would never have consented since were were friends if she wanted to fuck them she would have already . The drug does actually work that way so its totally realistic. This is my first submission

A good story and a lovely model!

Good story and the pics were amazing!

Best pictures and story please write another soon ! ! !

Loved the story and the model was fantastic , love to see more of her

Where is the pussy?

and pictures.

r you ashamed of what his bitch looks like

Pics are excellent!

The last pic (page 2) & the 2nd last one (page 1 bottom) are PRICELESS!!! I gave these 2 pics a 5+ (5 stars one of which is a Super Nova).

To Kinkycouple2017:

Thank you guys! You are doing a goid job.

You've published 2 illustrated stories so far & i LOVE both.

This one's got 113,396 views already.

To the model (I presume the wife is the model):

I am not trying to be rude but you do have EXQUISITE LOOKS. Your body is so sexy that it is more than the sum of its parts. You are special. Philosophically spffftteaking you are an emergence. Our maker created you to be a sexually appealing woman for the benefit of humanity.

You have one hot body!! Yummmm!!!

It's Right Where It's Supposed To Be----Between Her Legs

DUMB ASS

Great story hope there more to cum

I'm very much looking forward to part 2... what a beautiful woman!

Story less so!

2*

TRIED to read several of your stories.

Get some help from someone who knows how to write, spell, punctuate and has been taught Grammar!