by storyfella
Although brief they are very enjoyable. I am sure I speak for many in saying we enjoy the story so far, don't take huge breaks between chapters.
and check the action and make sure it doe not jump back a step or two on what has happened before.
Look for errors likely introduced buy some spell checker also
You need to go back
and check the action and make sure it doe not jump back a step or two on what has happened before.
Look for errors likely introduced buy some spell checker also
Yes Anonymous, do check the action for errors.