All Comments on 'My Summer Cougar Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Keep the chapters coming

Although brief they are very enjoyable. I am sure I speak for many in saying we enjoy the story so far, don't take huge breaks between chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
You need to go back

and check the action and make sure it doe not jump back a step or two on what has happened before.

Look for errors likely introduced buy some spell checker also

firemanlitfiremanlitover 6 years ago

You need to go back

and check the action and make sure it doe not jump back a step or two on what has happened before.

Look for errors likely introduced buy some spell checker also

Yes Anonymous, do check the action for errors.

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Due to ill health as a child meant I missed out on education. One of my worst subjects was English. I've never written anything in my life apart from the odd letter. I don't pretend to be a great writer and can't imagine ever being so. I started writing for my own pleasure and...

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