All Comments on 'Swing Time'

I enjoyed your story BUT you ended it too soon! I would suggest that you tell us what happens after the showers and during the night!

Finished too early-- give me the full picture

It did end too early. And I have fantasized about what happens after the showers. So we'll see.

5 star for sure ... but needed more elaboration in the last part of the story

The details of the porn movie were sometimes too long. But it was a nice story, though.

Write second part what happens after shower and in mid night.

Erotic and nicely written

Narrate the further extension of this story ch:2

Everyone had a good time and participated willingly. No jealously or hurt feelings. The weed gives everyone the perfect excuse if there is any remorse later. The porn movie provides the perfect catalyst.

I have been in similar situations, but the compatibility issue and the attractiveness issue or the unwillingness of one person always prevented it from going that far. Finding the perfect combination of four people or even an acceptable combination is like finding a unicorn.

All i8nto it in their own way. No jealousy at all?

Please treat us to chapter 2 and maybe 3.

Loved it. I support the request for an extension after the shower

The requested Pt.2 is posted. Here, enjoy!

https://www.literotica.com/s/swing-time-ch-02-1