All Comments on 'Revenge is so Sweet'

A bit rocky on plausibility but awesome on sexual heat.

Continue it!

Just a few constructive comments. You need to check your spellings before posting. It spoilt an otherwise good basic plot. Keep writing and ignore the trash comments stories like this get.

this is a good story but you must remeber what your writing about.

You said Louis is 25 and Diana and greg have a 21 year old daughter, so Greg could not of been at school with you.

other wise its a good story

Worst grammar and vocabulary I have seen lately: "that it had to of been Jackie." "I leave a couple of miles down."

Her dress was above her "waste..." I fear this story is a "waist."

I'm looking forward to the rest

Main character is 25. His enemy from high school has a 21 year old daughter. Was the husband, a father at the age of 4?

too illiterate to finish reading...

I stopped reading when an innocent was being used and held responsible for the actions of others (the guilty parties-her husband and sister). He’s no hero and I don’t feel sorry for him at all. He needs intense psychotherapy and LOTS of jail time!

As if all this illegal activity would be easy to pull off. How dumb.