All Comments on 'Job Interview - with a New Ending'

I liked the original; I think it was quite brave in tackling the issues of sexism in some workplaces, but I can also see why that isn't necessarily the sort of topic and discussion readers come to literotica for. This ending is sweet, warm and cosy and very well written, so I hope the other commenters appreciate your efforts in giving them the conclusion they were seeking.

I liked the theme of the original but both endings worked. Good job.

Why would a business executive leave his laptop in the hotel room of a new hire he had just had sex with?

That is asking for trouble!

Wish it was still up, now I’m curious what the first ending was!

I didn't read the first version, but this was well done. A different plot that flowed smoothly. June's transformation from not fucking Jack to being in lust with him while watching a porn film while naked was an interesting twist rather than the more common sex scene. Well written and good descriptions of clothing and settings. It would be fun and interesting to see what happens after she begins work.

I didn’t read the original but this is great. Loved the transition and the ending. I would be very interested to see where June progresses with this story line.