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by SlutAurore

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FASfanFASfanabout 6 years ago
Deliciously kinky

You write well, SlutAurore -- I would like to read much more of your work. Five stars -- thank you!

athompsoathompsoalmost 6 years ago
Good story, so-so english

The story was very good. The grammar and word choice and sentence structure are ... well, obviously that of someone who didn't grow up speaking English. And that's OK.

This was a very good story, as-is. With better english language skills, it could go from "very good" to "holy crap fucking awesome!"

I look forward to seeing more from this author.

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userSlutAurore@SlutAurore
4 Stories
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I'm a French girl with a fetish for swimsuit, leotard, and other tight spandex. I write some of my adventures, and some fictive. Ecrivez moi en français si vous préférez.