by Lia Monde
Great story. Good build up to the events in the store. What we all crave is detail. Keep it up. Your story did it for me.
I'm not usually into cross dressers but your story was so well done that I found myself getting excited reading it. I found Donna's acceptance of "Rose" to be a major factor in the enjoyment of this story. For a change there was no hint of humiliation by the woman and that made all the difference.
Ray
Nice story. At first it was a little plain, like reading a manual but when you finally got into a dialogue, it got better by the minute. Nice read!
Excellent pace, nice handling of the suspense, perfect length. And you stuck to the fundamentals. Too often in an erotic story, people try too many things. Enjoyed it very much.
Great story. I have often tried to get up the nerve myself. I like how the main characters in your story don't have sex. It is about getting off in the moment, isn't it? Keep up the good work. I'd like to read a "Part 2"!
This story is one of the greats on Literotica. Bravo to you, dear author. You obviously have great talent and seem to be putting it to great use. I'd love to see another story with Rose.
How I can relate. I love going out and buying sexy outfits and yes, I'm a man. Makes me want to go out and buy some new panties!
Sexy on so many levels. Personal, believable, likable characters. More than just a niche story. Shows how passion erupts naturally in the most unexpected places. I'll read more of your stories!
The best innocent cross dressing story I've read here.
Congratulations girl. It was seriously hot. and for once the guy didn't have to be gay :)
great story... I loved it, stroked off! Love the shopping stories...you did a great job!
Any way we can take Donna's brain, copy it and inject it's thought processes into the brain of every sale's lady!!!!
Would looooooove even more this story if Donna turned out to be Don in disguise, mmm
Di
This story is about a bloke having the 'bottle' to go into a store and buy women's underwear. I've done that loads of times. Know your size, take it to the till, pay for it. They think it is for your wife/girlfriend. I've been in Primark and picked out blouses and skirts and taken them to the men's fitting rooms. That takes a 'deep breath' to do so. The young 'saturday' staff absolutely know that you are buying women's clothes for youself. That takes 'bottle' to do so but it also gives me an enormous thrill.
You just showed how a crossdressing story should be written, as opposed to cheap gay stories so commonly found here.
I very much enjoyed the story. I liked how it stayed between a crossdreser and a woman.
Absolutely wonderful story. I'm so glad Donna was there for him and took charge the way she did. I'm also delighted that a relationship is developing with them.
What a lovely story and an excellent end... In more ways than one. As someone who loves wearing knickers and panties, It's the sort of experience we dream about. Thanks