All Comments on 'Umbrella'

At least, I hope it’s a start. You had me with “...started life at the age of thirty-nine and was only now catching up to it”. Genius.

This is a erotic story site. Why are you giving us a P G story?

Long time fan of your work. Hope you keep this going as it has several possibilities and I can only imagine what you're going to commit to "paper".

Anon

This is a great example of why the mind control is the sexier part of mind control porn. No sex scenes, just a really original, well written brainwashing. Also what the fuck is up with the incel guy below me?

But I'm deleting his comment.