All Comments on 'A Kitten Amongst Wolves'

loved the story.. think is every girls fantasy

Hope to read more like this.

Great story, would love to read the rest.

I hope you write on a professional level, i.e. regular books. You really put the reader in the thick of it! Keep up the good work.

kiya4men@aol.com

loved it. is there going to be any more to it

plz write more of this it was excellent

This was a great story. One of the best I've read. Very hot! I enjoyed that your story was tweaked a bit out of the ordinary with the wolf pack characters. Please consider continuing it. I would love to read more about this adventure!

I want to be hunted by the wolves and devoured!!!! lucky kitten

Great story .. is there another chapter? Would love to know how she settles into a life of being a sex kitten.

Will she escape???

That was a really good story, will you please write more so we can see what happens next.

Now that you've started, you HAVE to add more. Please D:

you NEED to write more, i don't know why you haven't on however many years, but that was amazing!

Hi guys

I just wanted to say that I'm so sorry I haven't written more. I am very proud of this piece and it's always been my plan to continue it, I have just never found the time or the right inspiration to work out what I want to happen next without the risk of spoiling what's already out there. I want you all to know that I LOVE reading your feedback, I am always popping back to read it. I really hope that I get a new flash of inspiration soon and come up with a sequel so I don't let you all down.

All the best

Sweet_kitten

I just found this yesterday and sadly didn't get to read it all until just now. I loved this so much and would love to see more. I hope you find inspiration for the next part which I'm sure will be just as good this.

Please continue

This story is great would love so much if there was more! Please continue!!!!

Please continue this story! :) It's so good!

Very powerful and well written.

I love how you have planned and written this story. The characters’ personalities are all very fitting of their role. I hope you could continue this piece please. I really can’t wait for more.

A sound insight into the fact that women don't handle freedom well.

Women need love, not "liberation". I'm sure we will see a happy kitten in coming stories.

sweet_kitten:

Well written, though I feel you could have put some more time into differentiating the experiences in the finale. If they'd been described as well as the early parts of the narrative, I think I'd have given you the last star. Still, very hot set up, and a nice opening act. I hope to see more.

Iamcurious: Really? A hot story is not social commentary. Women need the same rights and freedoms as men. Including the right to declare themselves submissive without it becoming a statement about their entire gender. There are submissive men as well. We don't say that means that men don't need liberation, or that it means something about all men everywhere.

Totally agree with you there Anonymous .. this was written back in 2005 and has never undergone serious editing. One of the reasons I have never created a sequel is that I would like to rewrite it with more focus on the character dynamics and the psychological manipulation of the 'Master' ... I think in many ways I got lost in the smut aspect when really the key excitement for me lay in the hunt itself and the desire of the 'Master' and his wolves .. I liked the layering of the different characters in the story ... some cruel and nasty ... some maybe empathic and the Master's mystery and Dominance. I still think back to this story all these years after it was written :)