by delicious_man
I say always leave them hanging, and you sure did a good job of that with your ending!!
I think you're a great writer for the most part. The only thing I did not like was when you went off in tangents about things. I did skip through some stuff. It is hard to masturbate when all of a sudden it goes from sex to miscellaneous talk. However, the story was very hot and the plot was perfect for me. I can relate to this character's need to be a bad girl. Overall, I enjoyed this story.