All Comments on 'Spanking Kenny's Wife Ch. 01'

A fantastic story! I loved every word of it. I cant wait for Part 2 - please be quick!

Not just a well written erotic story. The author shows a keen understanding of the use of submission to provide pleasure to a woman.

Great story. Very sexy and well written.

I lovedthe story line and the way you developed it. I found myself visializing myself as the female charactor which is a sign of a great story.

Keep writing

Jackie

The idea is tantalizing, the writing is fine, but the suspense is deflated. The story focuses too much on procedure. It's too much like reading an instruction manual.

It's much too polite and consensual to the last detail to be an exciting spanking story.

But, otherwise, the author has the potential to do well in future stories.

I was amazed...such a sensual exciting story..Had me imagining myself as your heroine or standing in line ready to be your next...cant wait for the next chapter..xxxx

This story hit my fantasy right on the nail. I was able to lose myself in the story & eagerly await the next chapter.

You made me quite moist in anticipation of the next chapter. I bet you get a call. If not, give me one.

I thought your story was a good start. Like the reader reading your story invested but didn't get much return. That's OK if the dividend is realized in Ch. 02 and the story doesn't go off on some stange direction. In other words, just a good, sensual spanking without developing into a 3some or cuckholding, etc. Stay with your premise and topic, please.

Wow, great story! I didn't even make it to part 2! Spanking stories really turn me on and the spanking didn't even start yet! Can't wait to read part 2, you did a great job on this story. I am excited to read the rest of the chapters, I think it will take me a while though. A girl needs a break once in a while... Thanks.

Terrific story. Keep it up. Love the drawn-out suspense. Great realism. Well-written character sketches with actions and dialogue describing without you telling me how to feel.

Good job!

when can you spank my wife?

You really make it seem so real. I was imagining myself in the role of Kenny's wife and it was delicious! Can't wait to get to the rest of them! Wonderful! Thanks!

Oh, my. What I wouldn't give to be this woman. Very exciting. I'm wet just thinking about it. So well-written, such great details and well thought out. Love everything you write.

I love how he laid it out for Jan. Great setup for the future event, and Jan sounds totally hot, with wonderfully smelling panties which I love. Can't wait to read the rest!

A very good reminder of why I, ME, will be the spanker! Holy cow, is this guy lucky or what?

I would be mystified (I'm hot on my passive tenses tonight)as to why anyone, male or hot slutty tarts (especially Gorgeous Am3rican Wives, they fuck anything)wouldn't be profoundly moved or even highly aroused by this superbly written, intelligently sexual fantasy of thousands, nay, hundreds of thousands of active people on all sides of this sizzling triangle. Girls must sometimes fantasise about gentle submissiveness, don't they? And though I'm always the guy administering the black and blue backside to my personal whore, I revel at the thought of her getting tanned by any brother bull(in brit that means walloped, or spanked)and will certainly arrange for that to now happen, having read this classy tale by Pro Ball(that is slightly too American a name, unless, forgive me sir if I'm wrong, we brits are terribly polite,old boy,and of course you could be Japanese as there was nothing in the story to suggest otherwise, and they also indulge the banality of "baseball" blah blah - (People, read the story, it is good)fan of this author and Quin and Coolomon and many more and my greatest respect to the almost funny with it, but just too xenophobic and therefore coming across as crass and unimformed whilst really he's a pretty perceptive guy and doesn't need to lower himself to a troller at brits.I've been to the graveyards in Normandy and seen the acres, the multitude of beautiful marble that will never stand as sacred as the dust of the Americans who gave their lives for a free world in that war, so don't denigrate them PISTOLPACKINPETE by bashing the country that stood side by side with you, and also fought and died.

This spanking thing is all new to me but after reading this story I want my husband to finger me and then spank me to.

This captured so many of the feelings I have when being spanked although we never involve others. Brilliantly written!

Your story flows so well and pulls the reader along wtih it. No way to quit reading. I'm going to read part two right now.

I was hooked immediately, and I'll be reading every chapter.

It was more of a how to with some sex tacked on the end. In fact I think that if you did some editing it would make a much better how to on the art of spanking for pleasure then an erotic story.

i am 62 & I got an erection reading your story.

Keep up the good work please

The woman who wants to be spanked is a KEEPER!

Inadvertently read ch 6 1st, had to find out how it started! Exactly the scenario that 'whets' my appetite, love the style of writing and content, already a fan 😊

This is the best spanking story ever. I really enjoyed chapters 1 through 5. I didn’t really like chapter 6. Otherwise you hit a home run in my book. Definitely will be rereading my favorite parts

Very very erotic.

Totally believable.

I gave you a 5- (4.6 = 92%, ★★★★★-).