All Comments on 'American Girls Down Under'
by ElectricBlue
- 16 Comments
SWT3over 5 years agoAnd very well written. And I have read until 3 in the am. TTFN
JerseyGirlDownUnderover 5 years agoWonderful collaboration, beautifully written and seamlessly put together. I liked the surprises from each of the clearly developed characters.
This American Down Under gotta get me some of that sexy Adam. You never know what you'll find in Sydney arrivals, eh?
Anonymousover 5 years agowith not a bit of porn in it, really. Thanks to both of the authors. 5*
Anonymousover 5 years agoOnly comment, you were lucky to find a cab driver here who would help with the luggage😁 I wonder where was that island?
Anonymousover 5 years ago...except for the tiny annoyance of your frequent use of "lead", where you should have had "led".
Example: "Follow my lead, I'll show you how to get down to the beach" The past tense of that might be, "He stepped out in front and led her down to the beach."
Not a huge deal, just a little niggle that jars against the near perfect beauty of the rest.
ElectricBlueover 5 years agoAuthorbut you can't make him spell. Good catch, missed by both writers. I blame the lead in my pencil, don't know Loqui's excuse :).
GrrrreatImaginationover 3 years agoWonderful! Such a sexy collaboration. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoWhen at an Airport, the 'Arrivals Board' will normally display the Arrivals at that airport.
On arriving in a country on an international flight, it is normal to collect baggage, before clearing Customs!
ElectricBluealmost 3 years agoAuthorThe anon who proclaims travel expertise didn't read closely enough. Adam is not in Sydney, the girls had already cleared customs (in Sydney) and had just flown a domestic leg to another city. 0/5 for comprehension.
RomanceLivesalmost 3 years agoWhat a wonderful story from both you and Loqui. It's a perfect combination of characterization, setting and dialog. The sex is hot yet at the same realistic. I'd call this the Erotica of Lit.
I came here from Loqui's site, but think I'll be exploring here for a while.
A number of years ago I spent a couple of weeks on the east coast, in Sydney, Brisbane and Cairns. As a Canadian who's visited some of Europe and the USA, I feel that Australia is the only place I'd return to. It felt to me that Canucks and Aussies are cousins in spirit. Maybe someday ...
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