All Comments on 'Goblins' Rise Ch. 04'

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jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenover 5 years ago
Quite nice

Lots of sex, good plot development and storytelling. And most importantly, at the end of the day, the girls do seem to enjoy what they do.

StrokespeareStrokespeareover 5 years ago
Happy to see more

Glad you’re continuing this one! Looking forward to seeing more

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Roast Ham

Catherine. I feel as though I'm in a bar, and someone is chucking a Large Ham Roast in my direction. I see it coming, but I don't need to move, as it misses me, and lands with a thump, beside me. I am... slightly impressed at the attempt. But this certainly didn't have the impact that was intended. You could say it was a little... ham-handed?

Confusing metaphor aside, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for writing!

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Sorry I haven’t posted much this year. I have been busy with work and doing some commissions. Leaving me little time to write or edit stories for Lit. Thanks for all the great feedback, and encouragement. -Satinslip 8/20/19 Married and encouraged to express myself through e...

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