All Comments on 'Sara & Laura Ch. 02'

Loving the slow burn build up.

This is a fantastic follow-up chapter. Love this writing style.

Hoping to read the next chapter soon. But I'd gladly wait for a well written chapter instead of a rushed one.

Very exciting. More please!!!

Wowee indeed. Keep the creative juices flowing. more of the internalisation of both characters please. expand the emotions. less on physical sex more on suppositions. Bloody good start.

I love the depth of both characters, looking forward to seeing more of this story... fucking hot

That was amazing. I want to see this relationship further developed. This is going to be really good, I can tell. Just keep it like this and keep the character development going.

Best new writing I've read on here for a long long time. Very believable psychological elements to their burgeoning relationship, and if the masturbation scenes are this hot the sex scenes should be pretty wild! Congrats, and keep up the good work!