All Comments on 'To the Rescue'

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KantariiKantariiover 5 years ago

This was a nice, enjoyable story to read🌹Kant

SparkyMark1961SparkyMark1961over 5 years ago

I agree with Kantarii this was a nice story that was enjoyable to read. This is one of my fantasies almost to a tee. Really liked it. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Enjoyed

Very well written. Enjoyed from beginning to end. Not easy to achieve. Please continue with these types of stories. You have a unique gift

BillieMBillieMover 5 years ago
Would be a great character to expand on.

I hope to read more about Norm/Natalie.

PrinzmettlePrinzmettleabout 5 years ago
Well done!

Good pacing. And I liked that the story held the trajectory and did not blow up at the end into something else. (no pun intended)

NewOldGuy77NewOldGuy77almost 2 years ago

A fun little read...

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I reject your reality, and substitute my own. My stories are not meant for those who seek complete reality, which I assume my pen name should give away. In my little world, there are no STDs, unless necessary to the story. The weird exception is the rule when you step into ...