All Comments on 'Back in the Game'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
WOW!

Very very well done please keep writing cuz I am so looking forward to it thank you

DunkirkDunkirkover 5 years ago
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They need to keep this going. Hopefully he will give her a baby bump

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Great writing. Minor glitch in that he drove to the restaurant but they took lyft back. Maybe too much too drink. Anyway great story and short but with great detail.

d24nlookin4d24nlookin4over 5 years ago
Welcome back!

Thanks for the fantastic story. I hope we get to explore these two characters more, but even if you choose to go in another direction I am glad that you back to writing after a 15 year hiatus.

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Here for chat and fun, looking for inspiration to write more. Almost divorced and ready to get out there again and remember what sex is! ;-) I'm a little hesitant though so be patient... Please read my stories and let me know what you think! Also, not in Vermont... I keep tryi...