All Comments on 'Necessary Control'

by macktosh

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Fantastic more please

ender2k2kender2k2kabout 5 years ago
Good story

You accomplished a lot in a short story. Thanks.

maddictmaddictabout 5 years ago
Friends

Any ideas on your next release ?

Amy whipped it out pretty fast,her key I mean.

jmkuehnjmkuehnabout 5 years ago
More!!!

How have you let this story lay fallow for so long? This is an absolutely awesome story and begs to be continued.

sammy_808sammy_808about 5 years ago

i really hope you'll continue this series!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
More control

I think Dana needs more control then one day. Amy should have locked her back up after the one orgasm and continued to be her key holder.

masculinbrainmasculinbrainover 4 years ago
Good ending

It's good to know Dana is still wearing the belt, a few month on. She gets regular relief from Amy, but always with handcuffed, so she can never touch herself.

paullankypaullankyover 4 years ago
Locked Longer

Please continue with this erotic sensual story , wonderful to see Dana being controlled below . Paul

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Great story Mac! You should really do a follow up. This was so hot!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Amazing!!

Please continue with it its amazing i would love to see alot more of it and maybe make her more cruel and punishments ruins

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
So good

I wish you dident let her cum though, but so good!!

TheOneWhoLikeToReadsTheOneWhoLikeToReadsover 2 years ago

Hottt 🥵 is the stories will get next chapter im curious want to know what gonna happened in their relationship

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well, it would be nice to read more about the relationship between these two girls. Seems now to be a really good time for the two. Just how long will they play? Will there be any blackmail from an outside source? Just how far will Dana get pushed to be allowed to cum? More chapters, please.

Considerate7Considerate710 months ago

More chapters would be really nice

basicbrat181basicbrat1818 months ago

Please continue this I wanna see how far they go how long she’ll be denied for how much more has to happen to get the sweet release

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

please more chapters, please

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I'm an amateur writer who specializes in F/F pairings, cute romance, and safe, consensual BDSM. Feel free to message me about ideas, feedback, editing, whatever. 3/5/2021 Update: Hello! It's been a while. I wasn’t able to write much in 2020, and I won't be able to write much...