by Lorelei907
Fantastic sex aside, this was well written. By your words alone, I can feel all the emotions you’re going through entering a new relationship. Fantastic job!!
OttawaGuy
I am a sucker for romance — this was sexy, romantic and well-written. Glad she has her lover.
Great story. I love romantic stories and this one was really good. I also love happy endings. I hope you continue this story.
This is such a hot story! You write so well. I really identified with Julie, imagined that she was me:)
I liked this story: the sexting was really nice to read and so it was the description of the mutual sexual knowledge of the girls. Nice and natural dialogues make it very real and so, yes... you deserve the Hot mark on it :D
A.
The sex in this story was mind-bendingly beautiful and erotic, but my favorite part was the initial texting the girls did. We all remember when we had that first feeling we loved someone, but had so many fears about putting ourselves out there lest we be rejected. It made me so happy when Lori told Julie she liked being kissed by her. That was the moment the world changed for these lovely lasses.
What a wonderful description of two lovely ladies showing their passion for each other. The build up was perfect and it was great to see the fears and uncertainties expressed so well. Brava!