All Comments on 'A New Sales Role'
by WatchedBeth
- 13 Comments
Anonymousover 4 years agoThank you sweet Beth for the story. Now we are waiting avidly for the new one.
HardBenover 4 years agoA great erotic story. Boy would I like to own a video store now for you to visit...LOL
Anonymousover 4 years ago"... older community for nearly 4 years," All numbers under 100 must be written out.
She wants to look professional and business-like so wears an outfit that displays her breasts and buttocks prominently? Well, okay if that is the criteria she feels she needs to get the position.
"I was interviewed by two gentlemen, one was the owner, the other was the Sales Director." Those are two subjects that should be separated by a semi-colon or a period after "owner" or should have an "and".
" and they liked my experience working with the food provider, it showed" Again there should be a period after "provider."
You need to either learn basic punctuation or get an editor. If your goal is just to write strokers where no one cares about all these mistakes, you need change nothing.
Banskbritover 4 years agoReally enjoyed this story.
More of a build up than usual which increases the anticipation.
In parts it bought a grin too my face, but that didn’t take away from the sexiness of it.
I love the way in which across all of your stories, you are always the one that is really calling the shots.
Women hold the real power in life me thinks 😁
Damn, I think I have ran out of your stories now.....you need to crack on and get some more done😉....please
JBEdwardsabout 4 years agoThis was quite an enjoyable story. It's a fantasy to get ahead in that way, and a nice one, too. Well written. Sexy Beth sure is easy, isn't she? I like the drama as she gradually realized what was going on. Five stars.
Imagination_Manabout 4 years agoI liked the build-up and the fact that in the end she was so turned on. Very sexy, it made me more than smile!
Lic2pleaseover 3 years agoGood writing, sexy lines.....a bold sales lady....She can call on my studio weekly, hee hee.
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Anonymousabout 3 years agoMan I luv your stories. OOOooo to have a wife who would tell me her stories of her day like yours..fuk Beth...Thankyou for the best sex ever.
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