by One Wounded Dragon
What a fantastic story. I couldnt stop coming. Lets have more - Pleassssssssssssse
Wounded. Hey this is one damm hot story. Made my tounge hard. I will be watching for more. Just one question her thinking she is pregnant two minutes afer getting fucked does not make it so. Know its fantasay but write another one and let us know that she did get knocked up for sure. okdeacon
Okay. There's nothing wrong with criticism of a story, but if you don't like the genre, why are you reading it? Judge it for what it is, a cuckold fantasy story. Don't like the fantasy? Either learn to live with it IN CONTEXT or don't read it. This is the same as giving a horror flick 1 star because you don't like horror flicks. Such a review is unhelpful to everybody.
Personally, I do understand the cuckold fantasy but it's not my bag. However in terms of a cuckold story this seems like a good one to me and I like the vocalness of the woman.
It's not easy to make phone sex exciting. Often it gets in the way. This piece did the job very nicely.
This story is absolutely one of the best I have ever read, erotic and not. It was well written which is nice and easy to read, and oh so sexy. You honestly need to write more...perfect.
Damn it!!A GREAT story!!!Loved the idea of her becoming pregnant with some strangers baby!!
A good story...I gave it 4 stars....
I think you should delete a negative comment if it so warrants it
If my wife came home knocked by another man--I would kick her cheating ass out the door--go live on the streets whore
I often read the comments before the story. It's usually the closest thing to a warning. I usually don't like cuck stories; this is only the second one I like.<br>
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After reading the comment from "Ardin Resolute" I decided to keep an open mind, and I read it in context. With that in mind, I love this story. <br>
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I was going to complain about the number of times she said 'oh, wait', but when I searched for it, there were none. That's when I realized it's 'oh, Walt'. heh. oops. Knowing *that* makes the story even better.
I masturbated so much P.S If you see me on Kung Fu Panda World www.KUNGFUPANDAWORLD.COM i will be MasterKai thanks
I know how cheating can be and this kind of shit makes it perfect for those who were cheated on...the girl can cheat and the guy gets to cum with her and then gets to fuck her alone when she gets home...so perfect...
Hi,
This is a hot, sexy story and I very much enjoyed reading it
Thanks
Joe
My wife did this for real. This story turns us on a lot. Thanks , and , write more.
A little rushed... the idea was interesting... just needed to be a little more descriptive. Don't give up!
"Well, have you tried calling the hotel desk?"
"I tried that. It's late. All I get is the answering machine."
Even at the smallest hotels late at night, that would never happen. Therefore, at that point I knew it was a stupid story so didn't read more and gave it the lowest rating.
Look I'm ok with the premise; in fact that's why I wanted to read the story as the idea of talking on the phone while fucking intrigued me; however I find two faults in your delivery.
Firstly she is having this open dialogue with her husband and no one around her is aware of it or notices. I mean that would be ok if we lived in a world wear schizophrenia was common place and people having random conversations with themselves was normal but we don’t. The second issues I have is the “Oh wait,” at the beginning of every sentence. My god it was mind numbing. I haven’t wanted to throttle anyone so badly since I heard Frank Zappa’s Valley Girl.
Not a five but I’ll give you a solid four and hope for better.
You want a pregnant-by-another-man slut for a wife? Besides being pregnant I wonder what other social diseases she's bring home to you. No, it's time to divorce the whore and save yourself a ton of grief.
what is this why did they get married now shes gonna have some niggers baby
this marriage is bound for the divorce court
"Oh wait" "oh wait" "oh wait" "oh wait" got a bit boring to read over and over and over
If she and her lovers were close enough to come home and fuck her in front of hubby, why did she have a hotel room? I might have missed something - very possible since I had to stop reading and start again several times for real life interruptions. But still, unless she went there to pick up someone for just what happened I guess that's why she was in a hotel close to home, and why the headset.
And at the end hubby was in satin panties. All fits in to the cuck fantasy. Fairly well done in this genre. The 'Oh Walt' that kept repeating was a little much though.
This was difficult to read, it made no sense, it's like huge gaps or chunks of the story were left out from the moment she stepped out of her skirt.
Based on this weak ass cuck crap, that this baby lizard is wounded enough to stop writing.
My husband and I got into an argument and we separated. I went out to drink and dance. I met a wonderful man named Danny. I brought him home with me and we spent the entire night in my bed having sex. He left for the military the next morning. I do know he was on tours of Iraq or Afghanistan. But I don't know if I ever asked his full name. But, Danny, if you ever think of me, I had your son, and he looks a lot like you. I hope you will remember my name. Nancy.
"Oh hon" "Oh hon" "Oh hon" "Oh hon" "Oh hon" "Oh Walt" "Oh hon" "Oh hon" "Oh Walt" "Oh Kimmy" "Oh hon"
What we need here is a "willing suspension of disbelief" for all who are objecting. I offer my own willing suspension of disbelief as a path toward my own arousal. I admit imagining my own wife, who travels alone for business often being caught up in her own need for fulfillment while away from me. Like this wife's exhibitionist game taken to the next step, I hope mine too will find a way of fulfilling her desires by confessing making me her cuckold live and over-the-phone. -FH