All Comments on 'Breathless Stargazing'

You win, Og, you win! LOL Getting to the end--priceless! :)

Og, you had me laughing from beginning to end with this one. I have go run and get some tissues now... God! *wide grin*

Absolutely hilarious!!! I wish I could have voted higher than the 2.82772900287262523892302 that I gave the story!!

Good luck!!!

(actually, I gave it a 5, but don't tell anyone)

Though you had a grammar error early in the story I still gave you the five bomb because the remainder of the story is quite hilarious and more than deserving of a good vote even though you likely would appreciate a low vote just as much as you will the high vote in the case of this particular story I am forced to deprive you of the honourable last place award you so earnestly desire, and so richly deserve.

That was extremely difficult to get through (my mind ran out of breath several times, hence highlighting the meaning of your title), but well worth the effort. What a superb bending of the rules! You rebel!

A smile is so much more, as it is part of lifting the soul.

Thank you,

Peggytwitty

Oh, the horror!

Cheers, Og. Well done.

hyperventilated on this one og... So I don't remember what I gave it.

Why was I reading this at 4:47 a.m.? Og, I think my IQ dropped significantly, and I might even have burst a few hundred little nerves in my head. I'll never be the same again.

great!

Og great job hilarious and horrendous and maybe even a bit of an arduous journey to the ending... but so well worth it! ;)

Good Luck!

~LB~

You're not? Somehow I didn't think you would be. That was an evil, dastardly, and very funny thing you did to we poor readers.

Rumple

Loved it og... even if my english teacher would call it a run on paragraph.

You made it hard to read because you want to set the bar for last place...LOL. It won't work, I don't think. 5 bomb coming your way...hehehehe! ~Minx

and yet cute. thanks for the wonderful story.

and good luck in the contest.

Ogg....

I am laughing so hard my sides hurt....

what in the world were you thinking

I had to give you a 5 for that because it took me 2 minutes to find my contacts after they had watered themselves out of my eyes.

Lizzy

but it was funny enough to rofl several times.

That was ONE long sentence.

And I get bollocked for using too many commas :)

Well f@$& you, Lien and Naoko, and all the horses you rode in on. If the master can do it, so can I!

to write outside of your own box? To take on a style so different from your norm that readers wouldn't believe it was you if not for your name on the story? Yes. Yes, it is. And I admire writers for doing it. Well done.

You are a very bad man. :)

I think you forgot a comma in the very first sentence, Og. :-) 5* anyway!

I smiled, I think it was 50 words into the first sentence, then kept on smiling a few hundred words later when I'd finally finished said sentence...and story.

Beautifully done!