All Comments on 'A Transforming Trip Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
MORE

More .... you cant leave them like that.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Superb

Response a, a, c

Well done, very complete. I loved the story line and think it really helps make the sex better. I want to know my characters!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Excellent

a,a,c

I would have liked Claire to seduce a young French boy!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
hot

b,a,c

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
thank you

a,a, definitivly not c maybe they should start to screw ohers but it should go on slowly. They are in love with each others and dont wants to do hurt the other one.

I really loved your stories and check everyday for some updates :D

werebarewerebareover 17 years ago
a,a,a

The fact of a fairly credible story line makes it much better than the straightforward suck-and-fuck type of story.

Personally, I'd much rather you keep the characters developing only slowly, basically in love with each other but with expanding horizons (in more ways than one?)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Hot

a, a, a (maybe a little extra fun): Enjoyed it all. Can't wait for their adventures as fugitives. Hope you haven't given up on writing. You're very good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
thanks

a,a,a

excellent story please send more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
More

aaa Don't stop now...

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
very orginal and GREAT writing.

I read all 8 in two days just couldnt stop. Keep it going my friend they were all great. Just for my personal taste dont let the men swap wifes but maybe the women can get together. I am not big on the cheating thing but my wife or claire showing to another man is huge turn on. Great work and please keep it going.

Gem

cheerfulcharliecheerfulcharliealmost 13 years ago
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a)

a)

and, I'd rather have just seen a proper swap between the 2 couples, and maybe some lesbian sex

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
a,a,a.

Last answer a, although perhaps a swap or group sex between the two couples would have worked also.

cheerfulcharliecheerfulcharlieabout 12 years ago
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AAC,

with expansion on the lesbian theme

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Your Request Feedback

AAC

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
feedback

A A A

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Feedback on Questions

A,A,C (include Pascal & Veronique)

NaughtyCaroline68NaughtyCaroline68over 9 years ago
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A,A,C (Lot more experimentation involving the other couple, (Anal, Oral, Etc.))

Great story, enjoyed the read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
AAC

A bit too much back story, really.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
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I too am in the AAA camp. Actually nice to see that Claire doesn't start to give it up to everyone. The story line is only a couple of weeks old after all.

Makes a really nice change that they stay together and actually love each other. Normally they end up screwing everyone and it isn't really plausible. This generally was though I thought the cafe scene in the casino was a little unlikely for Claire. I would have used the clips of naked Isabella in the office.

But a really good read. Very much enjoyed it and I will look at my compliance officer in a different way!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
AAA

Superb, especially with the unexpected twist at the end.

Will there be a sequel.

DonakasamDonakasamabout 9 years ago
Enjoyed the story

A, A, A

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
AAA

AAA

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

AAA

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
fantastic writing

AAC

ShyRomanShyRomanabout 7 years ago
Great

Great story. My answers are a a c. Would love it to continue, enjoyed the flowering of Clare's sexuality

norcal62norcal62over 6 years ago
Upset by the typical characterization of British male as weak, wimpy, sexually.

Supposedly he's married to a fantastically beautiful woman; way too good for him, and he's uptight about sexuality. Correct? Result of British school upbringing? Why do Brit authors think this is erotic? It's highly annoying to keep reading over and over. I enjoy the sexuality between spouses and others, but the continual self doubt is unrealistic and diminishes the story.

norcal62norcal62over 1 year ago

Why do Brit male characters almost always be prissy; always diffident, unsure until the female takes the lead? Is it the British public (private) schools?

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Aaa

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