All Comments on 'Daddy and Little One Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Mmmm-mm!! Where is this going?

I hope Daddy is loving and not too mean. I hope that things progress nice and slowly!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Possibilities

Sounds like a very tender, loving Daddy. Very much looking forward to the next Chapter.

JustSkyeJustSkyealmost 18 years ago
Watch it take off like a rocket!

I knew you could do it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Ooooh

promising.

hope it doesnt turn into a BDSM fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
what sort of daddy?

i'm hoping for a soft and tender daddy who will teach little one sensual was she couldn't even dream of. his authority should be comlete, but her submissiveness should be tender, not all bdsm like.

BabyBlackRoseBabyBlackRosealmost 18 years ago
Little One

I love Little One ..She has some experience sexually , I can see already. I like the way you have made it her point of view of the story her feelings .How she is seeing things.I await your next chapter...

I wonder what a daddy could do for me ? Just an out spoken thought , no need to reply..

Thank You for sharing Please send more ..I'll be waiting

I Remain,

Sincerely Yours ,

Baby @-->-->--

txrosenaynaytxrosenaynayalmost 18 years ago
great start.....

this will be interesting respectfully fan in Texas naynay

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
HI

I really liked this story, so glad I happened upon it. Can't help but wonder if the author has experience in this type of situation. I certainly love it's gentleness, unusual for the genre. Looking forward to reading more.

elizabeth22673elizabeth22673almost 17 years ago
i am going to be busy today reading...and..

well ya know *wink*

awesome chapter 1 and looking forward to more.

Liz

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Cute

sounds like a cute story - must go read the other chapters now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
The name 'Little One' is not a reference

to an under age girl thank fuck but it's already starting to grate. And I have 22 chapters to go? The thing is it looks like a good story, and I quite got off on the Dickensian setting of the first chapter. Well, I love older man-younger girl non-incest stories so here goes...Mancelt.

JateJateabout 14 years ago
hoping for a historical but you got my interest either way

The car has me confused as to whether this takes place in the victorian era or not.

philamoxiephilamoxieabout 12 years ago
So simple and sweet

Short, sweet, and instantly one of my favorites. I can't help but think I am Little One. I miss Edith's fingers in my pussy, too.

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