All Comments on 'Latent Tendencies Ch. 11'

I just found your series and I love it. I hope to see chapter 12 soon.

the first few chapters were great, but now its like paul is just an afterthought to the couple, a thing to only please them. look at it this way: she finds true love and geat sex with her brother, then a few days later she has love at first sight with another woman and he just accepts the loss of all the attention his "soul mate" was giving him. she has sex constantly (blown out of proportion, i know, but it reads that way) with this other woman (even if its in his presence too), proffessing to love her, talking constantly to her, writing erotic letters to each other, etc. practically forgetting him and diverting 99% of her attention to the woman (he just accepts this???? not even the slightest bit of jelousy????? no chance). this story is more lesbian than incest. Paul is in the story just to add a live dick to the lesbian affair. it just doesnt read well. i know its like every mans dream to have 2 girls at the same time, but that is only if they pay more attention to the guy than the women pay to each other. this is too extreme in the opposite direction. and all the constant crying...real turn off for me personally, not that i dont love some emotion, but constant crying?

its has def grown to be one of my favs. the cliff hanger is killing me though lol please keep up the good work cant wait to read more of this wonderful piece xD

I just finished reading all of Latent Tendencies (ch. 1 thru 11), and really loved it. Thank you very much for your writings. I know it's been a while but was wondering if you could continue with more chapters?

more please and fast this story is hot

please continue this story...best ive read on literotica so far!!!

I hope you do continue with this story. I really enjoyed the storyline and want to finish what I know will be a great ending. TY jawolfe91051@yahoo.com

Was going well till you be ought someone else in on it. When will people ever understand that when siblings love each other the way these to did has to get others involved in their sex life especially when it is suppose to be their wedding night. This sucks and is disrespectful

Good story should have made it about just the two women though because i feel like they definitely don't love paul as much as they say, he should find someone else and leave those two

they witters always make the sister like girls so the brother (writer ) can fuck more pussy.

Should have just been the two of them making life for themselves and not every other woman.

Totally fucked the story up hate it.

I cheated and read the last chapter. Went in the wrong direction completely. Totally wrecked a wonderful story. you know my reasons.

I was up to the Josie addition, but now Will not finish the story.

What a disappointment.

Will remove this story from my favourites and find a better one.

Not wasting any more time on this mess.

Glad u walked away from this story. You have no idea what incest is truly about or how it feels. This is a Lesbian tale with a touch of incest.

Paul should’ve kicked their sorry asses to the kerb, real jealousy, would’ve kicked in quite quickly, incest couples do NOT share, ever.

Jen never loved him more than herself, she is a self centred bitch and stupid Paul comes across as a weak cuckold.

If this was real, his pain is just starting😂