All Comments on 'Soul Food Pt. 05'

didnt know how i was gonna feel about the birth family but i enjoyed it

Another lovely chapter. I'm glad to see the birth family is on the level, seem to really care for Denis and are trying to get to know him without ostracizing him from his "adoptive" family. 5 stars.

Very enjoyable and a good meeting with the birth family. Keep them coming.

Great work, just the right mix of story to sex, can't wait to see what happens when the moms meet

Kind of feels like you skipped over a lot of the beginning of Denis and Caroline's developing sexual relationship. Would've been interesting to hear how that intimacy and trust grew.

Loving these last two chapters.

I second Private. This one should've been almost double with how many plots you put into it and how much time they'd need to be really developed. Denis opening up, he and Coraline starting to have sex, the gym sparring scene, him spending time there bonding with the family. It felt a bit that with Teagen, after them being pushy he fastly accepted and moved on which didn't really fit his character in a short timeframe like that.

You Mr. Soul71 are the best Author here, by far. Second to none! I love all your stories. I'd love to give you 25 stars for this series, it's that good. My favorite story is "A Family Destroyed". This is my next favorite. Thank you for our privilege of reading your top notch stories! Another 5 BIG FAT STARS!

Helen as usual is a whore, now treating Will as a spare cock. Her "love" for Denis is based on her lust. She does not deserve to have neither of the two boys. Hope Denis will bond deeper with Coraline in the future, reunite and move permanently with her.

Yeah, that ain't happening.

A really enjoyable series to read. Looking forward to more. Really curious how things work out with Shawna.

One of the best series I’ve read on this site. That is saying a lot since I really love your stories.

Love this story would like to read more hopefully you continue it.

Great as are all your stories. You just seem to have several going all at the same time. You must be great at multi tasking.

Shame that you ended the story here, it has so much potential to evolve much further, still I enjoyed reading it again, thank you for sharing your work with us.

Great story, hope to read the next part

Great story, needs finishing

Really like this story hope to see it continue.

Dam want more of the story hope life is not keeping you to busy as I see it has been awhile since last chapter was posted. Is a very good

story and enjoyed it gave every chapter 5 stars.

I have re-read this many times and it always leaves me wanting more.

So please sir release the rest pleaseeee

Please write more of this story!!!

Love never dies and hate is always replaced by love

Dam was hoping for more when I realized I had read this before. Have to say was as good this time as the first time. 5stars all the way hope to read more soon.

OMG I'M STUNNED AT THE ENJOYMENT THAT I GOT OUT OF READING THIS STORY. ALL 5 PARTS WERE A MASTER WORK OF WRITING AS FAR AS I'M CONCERNED. i JUST HAVE TO READ MORE ABOUT DENIS MCCARTY AND HIS FAMILY BOTH REAQL AND BIOLOGICAL.

PKEASE SOUL71 GRACE YOUR READERS WITH MORE TALES ABOUT THE LIFE OF DENIS.

I started reading this story when only a couple of sections were posted. Then I found it again, was sort of surprised when it said "to be continued, but hasn't yet.

Love the story although that ending suggests you have to do another chapter where you could write about the time in college etc

Fun series

Do more

Just re-read this story series for the second time. Hope you continue with this story soon.

Can't wait for more

Can’t wait for the continuation of this, I must have read this 3 times now.

Hope you continue the story , very good.

This is a fantastic story I’ve loved every chapter so far and I’m looking forward to the next instalment of this and Pharoes curse.

Where is the next install of this.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

I need more of this! 10stars

This is another excellent series of yours, again read for the umpteenth time. Please continue

Just read this again, an it’s still a shame to end it here, nothing is concluded at all about Denis( isn’t that a female name ? ) or his family’s relationship with him or his birth mother? There is a lot for you to build on and eventually finish off.

It's a shame this hasn't been continued as it's a pretty good story. I would love to read more.

Read it 3 times now. Still waiting and hoping for more soon to come.

Can't wait for the next part

kinda funny if he gets everyone pregnant