All Comments on 'The Seduction of Lori Pt. 02'

Certainly hope is not "The End." ...

This chapter is as good or maybe better than the first. I loved the interaction and where the plot seems to be going. Keep writing.

What no part 3? Not fair lol

He is still an arsehole for messing with a married woman. In part 3 the wife confesses to all the texts and chats. The husband dumps the cheating skank and several friends of the husband finds the arsehole and cuts off his big black dick and sticks it up his arse and dumps him in the hospital the ex-wife works at the ex wife cries a river for her lost black cock lover.

Chapter 3 please

A great story line. Very much looking forward to Chapter 3.

A very sexy story. I do hope you continue with the seduction of Lori :)

We're gonna need a part 3.

“The End”…. No way! Such a great story line… you can’t end it like this!

Hmmmm, she grabbed the ol willy bare hand and licked the tip, she's hooked now man. An ass like that, you can't give up now, keep going for her and you'll be in the dark part of the applebees lot with her. Nice job

Yeah - we need part III. You can't end the story this way. Pretty please.

mmmmmm I love the way you concluded the trip to the ER! I sure wasn't expecting that at this point in your wicked tale!

HOT STORY!!!! The end? Really? I would have loved you could continue it....

Super story teller - but you must finish this one with a bang..so to speak. :) Thanks.

I sure hopes there’s more to this. Really hoping you got to stretch out that married white pussy. Be even better if there was a pregnancy risk involved.

continue please

Okay you’ve talked me into it. I’ll add the rest of the story in part 3

Definitely left me wanting more.

You tell a good tale Ryan. Looking forward to part 3, when you hopefully part those legs and fill her up.

We are in 60's now but in mid 1980's my wife loved cuddling up in sexy lingerie and watching ir porn. Her favorite stars were Nina Hartley and Buffy Davis getting railed by FM Bradley. In and out of Africa and blacks and blondes caught from behind set her soaked pushy on fire.....so many hot nights and soaked sheets reenacting the scenes while vhs machine worked ot!.....

Damn I can't wait for part 3! Such a hot story ! The slow seduction is just perfect. Ryan will get this freaking hot wife I have no doubt. But her getting to hard play is making the story so sexier! Please dont let us waiting for long!

Looking good! Lori cant wait! Good writing again. Amy x

Awesome story, getting better as I read more, Lori reminds me of my wife!

This story is just getting too long. Perhaps it should be in the novels section.

Developing nicely ….. onwards and upwards!

My wife and I enjoyed this second chapter even more than the first. Delightful humor, emotionally loaded interactions between everyone in the ER and in the restaurant. Also, a great, surprise ending! And we quote:

[Lori…took her glove off, grabbed my cock and knelt down and sucked the tip of precum off the head, grinned at me and said "That should do it, Mr. Tyler...you can get dressed now -- please make sure you fill out the survey you may receive in your email to indicate if we gave you good service...have a good night!"]

Brilliant, playful, and oh so hot! This story was every white wife’s wet dream! We’re going to read the next chapter right now!

Ryan, you are quickly becoming my favorite author. I'm glad to see this one was in interracial category rather than loving wives. While Lori is absolutely a loving wife, I have a feeling she's quickly going to be a black cock lover too! Can't wait to read the next chapter. xoxo

Sexy little white slut is going to suck on that bbc!

Through two parts, this series reads very natural and moves along at a great unrushed pace. It feels like a genuine size-curious seduction is taking place.

I'm sure the series will jump the shark as it's an eleven-part series and it will be tough to keep it interesting without raising the temperature of events but so far I think it's excellent. No angst, no humiliation, no over-the-top (yo yo wassup bitch!) racial stereotypes.

Even though this story comes as natural and simple, I just can’t stop asking a question: how many nurses are out there that haven’t seen a BBC?