All Comments on 'Country Road Ch. 01'

by oliver57

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frankjohnson2448frankjohnson244825 days ago

Superb! I fully enjoyed the time you spent on providing background for the two characters. I will be looking forward to further chapters. Thanks.

LunaDoggyLunaDoggy25 days ago

Absolutely excellent, as many of your stories are. Enjoyed reading this, and you've left plenty of scope for a sequel.

Sissyjulia2Sissyjulia225 days ago

Too bad I work on my vehicles. I would pay to break down and meet someone like that as she read my mind just by looking at me.

Ak610Ak61025 days ago

Amazing stuff. Welcome back

AnonymousAnonymous23 days ago

sounds like heaven for sure.....

AnonymousAnonymous23 days ago

Great start! Looking forward to future (hopefully many) chapters.

AnonymousAnonymous23 days ago

Nice premise.

But sex was much too rushed.

Sure would have liked to see some extensive teasing/playing with his cock and balls -- but not being allowed to cum.

Maybe he should have had to use his tongue on her asshole a bit?

Four stars.

condor62condor6220 days ago

I absolutely love this story and can't wait for the next instalment. It is so refreshing to finally read a femdom story where the submissive is neither an innocent young boy or an asshole who deserves to be humiliated and punished. Real people and real couples enjoy femdom and this story proves it can be erotic and interesting to read about them.

My only feedback would be that I don't know how many 62 year olds you know, but we're not that geriatric. "Once and done, for a while" might be accurate but the rest of the age related stuff sounds more like septuagenarians.

Thanks for sharing your work.

A_FoolA_Fool20 days ago

Mooorre Puhlease!!

AnonymousAnonymous7 days ago

THERE MUST BE MORE. I wanted to give it 2 stars ONLY BECAUSE OF THE HANG-UP ie. slang for the BEST NON-ENDING , ENDING!!! This is a GREAT STORY and I’M SORRY; THERE MUST BE MORE!!!…….In good conscience I HAD TO GIVE IT 5STARS

oliver57oliver575 days agoAuthor

Thanks to all for the positive comments. Another part is under way!

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Just an ordinary guy who loves intelligent, strong, dominant women. My stories are generally about lives I would have loved to lead as the male in them. olivercromwell2004@yahoo.com