All Comments on 'First Time My Wife is Shared'

Wrong category dipshit. 1*

Loved the story. Hope you'll consider sharing chapter 2 with us soon.

Thanks!

A long story? So short, no vivid details, no emotional context. When did so many writers on this site start writing 2-3 paragraphs and say "Look at me." I will(can) no longer be a regular reader.

I don't understand the not on birth control so you can't come in me scenarios that come up in these stories. That does not exist in a married couple's real life

this would be so nice

Punctuation is your friend. I couldn't finish reading it <sorry>.

Storyline was good, but the lack of feeling, terrible punctuation and grammar, and above all flow, made it painful to read. Use the tools the internet provides, get an editor and try reading it out loud as written.

Waiting for chapter 2. If I was you, I would be licking her where the two of them were joined.

Sorry to all that I can't write a true story the way it should be. Ic69 she was not on birth control because I was fixed and we never planned on doing threesomes. I was going to add more stories but why I can't write

I would love to share my bride like this. Hopefully one day. I would prefer pictures and video for later. A+

Your premise was good. Don't give up just have someone help you with the editing

Simple story. Written in an easy way to read. Not a dramatic work of art, but enjoyable. I was able to relate to the story.