by HaydenDLinder
interesting, look forward to reading more.
Efficient intro to main characters and ambiance.
great beginning!
Hey Anon,
Thank you for the comment. I spent a lot of time on this one. So, I'm very happy you like it.
Excellent writing, yes you have certainly captured my imagination and I’m looking forward to the next instalments, I like your style
Hi Ducatasti, That is very cool. It means a lot when someone enjoys my work. AND I think you will enjoy the rest too. Thank you for commenting and reading. And have fun. :)
I really enjoy your work and took the time to go buy a book to support you.
Thanks for an entertaining story.
This is so (so!) different from your other stories. Not just the content, but the pace, description, the writing style ... everything! Looking forward to reading more. 5 from me.
Hey Aspern, Yeah, this was actually the first thing I ever wrote. VERY flattered that you're enjoying it.
Thank you so much for the comment. That means a lot. :)