All Comments on 'Adi's Defloration Pt. 01'

That was a great start. I have never had a doctor get that bold, but I think I would have reacted similarly at her age.

I appreciate any comments and suggestions!

I love how you wrote the story from both perspectives, and makes both sides seem realistic.

If I had to offer one piece of negative criticism, it would probably be that for my tastes, it moves a little too fast. The doctor could have taken more time to get to the point. But that is a minor criticism.

Doctor should lose his license and go to jail for rape.

ohhhhhh! i need more!

really hot, but please move it to the nonconsent/reluctance category!

Felt the need to comment, an intact hymen does not mean someone is a virgin, and a broken hymen does not always mean someone isn't a virgin. I've known people who still had their hymen intact after losing their virginity, and people who broke their hymen from exercising too hard <3

Presume the custom of nurse always in the room during exam would make it awkward for flow of story...?

agree with 10 mo anon below-move it to non consent

wonder what her gf's are going to think /say when she feels them about HER first exam...?!?