by awriterssojourn
Mixed feelings about this story. Very well written, but I don’t like the arrogant attitude of Richard. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
You did an excellent job of character development and building the story. I really enjoyed it. Now I hope you certainly continue with it! You obviously have a couple ways to go, she just gives in each time Richard comes to her office, or, she becomes the professional she actually is, and remembers him bragging they should have held out for more, she's worth way more than 20k! Let her dictate the terms and deny him, knowing it will be a massive turn-on to her husband no matter what the reason...and she can get them on easy street while everyone has their lusts met.
It bothered me that two reasonably employed intelligent people would be thrown into desperation by an unforeseen car repair expense. I found that part of it unbelievable. That aside the build-up to the conclusion was well done. While the ending certainly leaves open the possibility of developing into a saga of cuckholdry and big cock desire I would prefer it to be left off as is.
Please continue with more chapters. I could not stop reading the whole last six chapters. The best written story on here in a long while! . I enjoyed how you built up the characters and all details right to the end.
Surprise by me, I did not see her submissive side to very late in the story. I hope the story continues With Richard dominating them. At the same time I
Like to see James and Sophie stay together as Sophie continues to submit to Richard. Then Richard either moves on or leaves the area. as James and Sophie put their lives back to get her. I like happy endings. Great story.
Really good story. Well written, and a believable premise. Having said that, I'm not sure which way I want the continuation (if there is any) to go. I guess time will tell on how you want it to go...
great story but 20 grand for a fuck ? good ending leave it there any more would be over kill and spoil it, very well written.
Winner in all categories. Hoping we get to read what they "face together". Sophie still has to attend that event. We must hear about Richard's next clinic visit as well.
Will they overcome this lunacy? Can the wife get past her humiliation? Will the villain offer more for a repeat, or to own the wife? Then, what becomes of the weak-willed hubby? Hmm.
This has to be one of the best stories ive read in a while ....hope you keep up these stories as you are a truly gifed writer . Please keep your stories going on litererotica and keep creating new stuff cheers
Love it. Would be great if Sophie helps Richard’s friends and business partners too.
A cuckold and a prostitute. What more can you need for happy families. How much to get her pregnant?
James is nothing but a sissy wimp cuck and Sophie is soon to be a cheating skank slut who realizes her husband is a joke. Hopefully she'll destroy his pathetic ass emotionally and financially in the divorce.
Wonderful. You should always make use of the assets with which the good Lord endowed you!
I know this cuckolding kink has its roots in a mental disorder, so in some way those men aren't entirely at fault for this sick shit, but they are at fault for not seeking treatment for it once they know they have it. At the very least, it's their duty to their wives and families and, most importantly, themselves, never to act on this deeply damaging kink.
Cuck stories are like BTB stories, as they all have the same plot, the same relationships, and the same characters doing the same things while uttering the exact same dialogue. LW needs to be retitled 'Loving Groundhog Day Stories.'
Outstanding, 5*!!! I think I like stories like this so well is because they show a woman finding new dimensions inside herself. I hope Sophie doesn't end up sacrificing everything else she is to chase the orgasms. That would be going back to one dimensional.
I think I've read this exact story before. If this is really a new story it reafs like it's either a cut and paste or a rework of another
I have red a similar story, too. But, who knows? There are really no new stories, all just variations on a theme. I enjoyed this one.
From the writer's OWN words and the reason this SH*T story is an all time CUCK SHIT / "cheating WHORE wife Apologist" story .... "Sophie held her head against his chest, "I'm so sorry, James. I don't know what happened. It just got out of control. You must think I'm such a slut."
One small error .... James (and all the readers) DON"T think Sophie is a slut because SHE IS A SLUT!!!
Easy *** 1 *** Star!!!
Very well written.
I enjoyed it a lot, and would be glad it if you decided a sequel was in order.