by SoCalAshley
An absolute GEM of a story ! Brilliantly written ... not only erotic but full of emotions. There is realism in the narration. I can relate in certain ways to Ashley's inhibitions incurred by a strict religious upbringing. I like the idea of inserting two chapters to give us, the readers, a window into their past. Well done ! I can hardly wait to read the rest of the "Heather" story.