All Comments on 'Harem House - Selene Pt. 23'

Great job, and I look forward to the next chapter. I'm enjoying how everyone is developing and the chemistry between them.

The ties that bind Arthur and all the wonderful women in his harem have never been stronger than when they were put to the test this way.

As always, the sex scenes were fire-hot.

Relationships are evolving! This series continues to develop the characters and progress the story in interesting ways. Thank you for the effort and thought you put into this. Also, putting a cast list, synopsis, dramatis personnae or whatever at the beginning may be helpful For catch-up or new readers and is easily skipped if the reader isn't interested.

This was an amazing chapter, thank tou

superb. The best ongoing story i've read on here. Tremendous work!

Excellent, good pacing on lots of scenes, some plot, and teasing new girls but focusing on the harem. Love the hint of sisterly fun in the future! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Another stellar entry in the series. My biggest complaint is the release schedule, but I know quality takes time.

Whew! The chapter description had me nervous but its fascinating to see the group's dynamic evolving. Can't wait for the next one!

love this story,

before the last two chapters i guessed that Lynn would get the role of the femdom in this relationship/for some of the girls.

i even guessed that she may be even the switch for Arthur.

Cause something says me he is not a 100% dom, more around 75/85%.

Well its still possible, that Lynn is the dom for him, but atleast the role for the harem dom is given to Kelly. :shrugs:

Thank god it was not a bad accident and nobody was seriously injured. The interplay between Arthur and Kelly then the bondage scene was outstanding, while I am enjoying Rani’s shared time with Selena. I wonder how long it will be before Kateryn joins the harem and before Kat and Selena enjoy each other’s bodies.

Please no incest 🙏

Hi.... Great story so far. But please try to upload atleast two stories in a month. I couldn't wait for an entore month for 1 story. Try to upload every 15 days if you can. Again I'll must say great story. Lastly i like how kat and Arthir are getting close with each other not just physically but emotionally as well. I would be good to see kat falling in love with Arthur.

And please no incest. Let Selene and Kat be sisters not lovers. Personally it would ruin their dynamics for me.

For fucks sake dude. No normal human being spends this much time discussing consent, sexual preferences, or feelings with one partner, much less multiple partners. I assume your kink is long and mostly pointless discussions about consent and that's great for you but frankly it makes for a really boring story

Incest is a sensitive term because it is associated with fathers abusing their children or brothers raping their sisters. Therefore, I understand that it meets resistance from some readers.

Personally, I have no problem with a fictional story where sisters naturally participate in sexual activities where they also interact with each other. The evil side of incest does not go for such elements in the story.

Above all, tell the story you want to tell. So far, I am enjoying reading it. I am really looking forward to next chapters. And I wouldn't mind if you post shorter chapters and then more than once a month.

I loved the story. Happy about them discussing boundaries since it's the first time they playing that way. Also I don't really mind Incest as long as it's consensual. I'm worried about the polyamory thing in the school and the unrest it could create.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Live this series. Hope to see more soon.

Where Mindy been at? I miss her pure filthyness. Would like to see Arthur take her to get gangbanged and truly slut out for him

Crazy this story has gone over 20 episodes but the eponymous "Harem House" is still yet to come in the future.

I love the distinct characterization of this story, but the pacing is a problem. More than three years of writing and still no harem house and only a few weeks have passed in story. At this rate the author will die before they get out of college.

It's also going to be problematic if the author either stops adding new harem members (half the draw of the story is gone) or keeps adding harem members (plot and character growth slows down even more).

I loved the scene with Selene and Rani! So hot. I am truly hoping that the 2 sisters don't start a sexual relationship, that's a turn off for me but I can always skip parts. Thanks for continuing the series.

SassyThompson, I enjoy Rani a lot, she's fun to write. I wouldn't worry about the incest. Selene might be curious about everything depraved, but Kat has her limits.

Great pacing here.