All Comments on 'Our Final Goodbye'

Good first story!

5

Outstanding first story. 5

Poignant *****

*****Thanks for the read.

Swinging by here to ca ch up on series. Too cryptic for me to read the characters emotions as they relate to their history. Otherwise, pretty well written. 3.7*

What a magnificent start! 5 stars!

Very well written but too many unexplained storyline and plot holes. Hopefully future stories will fill in the gaps.

Very well written. Full of feeling. I don't like people who get in their own way, even though that is endemic to the human condition. They are soulmates but not together? I don't get it, and that's frustrating. My problem, not yours. If you write a story that's ultimately happy, I'll be fully on board.